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Imaginative Writing Marking Feedback

1. Incorrect spelling 2. Incorrect grammar 3. Refine Word choice 4. Effective title 5. Ineffective title 6. Title needed 7. Clich 8. Show dont tell 9. Dialogue needed 10. 11. 12. 13.
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Dialogue should be formatted on single lines Authentic voice Creative ending Creative opening / ending Predictable opening / ending Effective opening / ending Further setting establishment needed Effective establishment of setting Further character development needed Effective characterisation Refinement of phrasing needed Refinement of idea is needed Ineffective change in tense Ineffective change in narrative stance Effective phrasing Poignant imagery Description is too verbose, make concise Avoid Informal expression Figurative language device needed to enhance expression

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Too plot driven Plot development needed New paragraph needed Language not appropriate to chosen form of imaginative writing Language is appropriate to chosen form of imaginative writing Features of chosen text-type missing or ineffective Exploration of concept is insightful / complex / subtle Exploration of concept is predictable / clich Exploration of concept is simplistic / too literal / inconsistent Lacks structural direction Effective manipulation of a non-linear structure Ineffective Linear structure Avoid starting subsequent sentences with I Avoid asking multiple rhetorical questions Link to previous idea/sentence needed

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