Javier(1)

I say its time for change we need to rearrange we need to change immigration laws because they bite like jaws it is time for a revolution because now kids can't go to a institution to bring lasting causes we have to fight without pauses In order for us to keep change we need to all agree and not argue so that way we don't split this country in two In order for us to keep the change we need to all agree and not jewels recently the government were mad and now they are fools The country needs to make new laws that would apply fairly to everyone we need to work on this problem until its done and if they do people would have their freedom if we work together we can help build a nation as good as a great kingdom We need to have meetings where everybody is represented legal or not create laws with a good plot there should be a plan on how to get people green cards and help people not get abused by border guards we need to stop illegal routes to america

When the french fought it was a good cause or so they thought they held public killings and made unfair changes on billings taxing the rich more than others but at the beginning they said they were brothers

Rodrigo (2)

The american revolution caused the british to go back home with a fighting spirit to the bone they spoke and planned documents in order for lasting change we must meet the requirements we should all have a vote legal or not obama was all about change he must have lost his train of thought I suggest that we make new amendments that protect us all so that this great nation does not fall we all follow what the constitution declares but it used to say unless you are white you could not be a millionaire it also used to say africans were one fifth of a man so lets discard this paper to a trash can lets make a new one which is not full of scorn and welcomes you no matter where you were born

what happens when the government is unfair while we work and they sit on a lawn chair maybe its time for a change they do bad things in visible range we need to be equal the constitution may need a sequel we need to change for the better and hopefully our cause is not like a dead letter

Luiggi Loconi(3) I thought this new land would give me freedom and equal rights

but instead its giving me hate and spite They said this was the land of opportunity where we could live in amity

In this country they say everybody is free but when will everybody mean me since when does a piece of paper determine who you are telling me to get into the white and green car they call me words like alien, undocumented, and wet back I crossed a river they crossed an ocean maybe they should be called soaked back They see us as lazy people but we are not we are people who work hard to so we wouldnt be bought We work hard for to support our children so they could have a better life but it is hard for us because of so much strife the struggle is real when being mexican is our achilles heel John Locke said we were all the same but our people feel more pain life liberty and property was promised but all we got was people who are dishonest politicians who promise to give me a chance but they don not even give us a second glance.

Jazil (4) The reason of the revolution was apparent the us fought a war to liberate all people form a tyrant yelling how they we were all children of god under a nation well I say you don't need papers to have a good occupationwe should all be equal and fight fight for a belief and a good right

We have parades and chant yes we can we even give the army abled young men we need to be brothers fighting side by side don't you think its time to swallow our pride Thomas Jefferson wrote these words on immigration that are more valuable than jewels your right to join us in society, conforming, as I doubt not you will do, to our established rules why did other revolutions start wasn't it because of of a leader who treated his people bad and wasn't smart the french the americans and the russian all of them had a cause fighting through a huge for equal protection from the laws Why is it that the declaration talks about being united but when the police separate families they are delighted this is supposed to be the country of freedom but we should seek further wisdom change is not all bad we just need a writing pad