WRD103 Process Report

YOUR NAME: Nicole Lopez

TITLE OF PAPER: Public Document
1. How much time (about) did you spend planning this paper?
(Include reading, note-taking, invention, brainstorming, outlining,
etc.) Explain what you did.
I did not spend a lot of time planning this paper however I did get
to everything we needed to do almost right away. I thought
about what I wanted to right about and ended up switching my
topic because I did not have full understanding of my first one,
which was on same-sex marriage.

2. How much time did you spend drafting? Revising?

I made three drafts, so I spent a couple hours drafting. I had a
peer from another class revise my essay, and I revised it to the
best of my ability.
3. What do you believe are the strengths of this paper? On what
levels does it work well?
I believe the strengths of this paper are the format and my
message. I believe it worked a little since I did change the topic.

4. What do you think are the weaknesses in the paper? What might
you do differently or change in this paper if you had more time?
I think the weakness was that I had limited time to come up with
an excellent essay since I did change my topic last minute. Next
time, I definitely will think of a topic I can actually talk about.

5. What do you want a reader to think or understand after having

read this paper? (This should be something he or she didnt
already know.)
I want the reader to understand my frustration with Jeffery M.
Lebvings message. He wanted the message to apply to every

child that experienced divorce, and I dont think that was fair at
all.

6. What kind of feedback would you like me to give on your paper?

If you ultimately decide to revise this for your portfolio, how can I
help?
If theres anything I can add or change to maybe get my
message across. Also to see if maybe I came off a little to harsh?