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DONE
Writers Name:
Editors Name:
Title of Paper:

1- List two things you really liked about this paper

a.

b.

2- List two things that could be improved

a.

b.

3- Character development
a.
Does the paper have at least 2 characters?

Yes or No ? (circle)

Names:_____________________ _______________________ ________________________

b.

Two examples of direct characterization?

___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________

c.
Two examples of indirect characterization (Speech, Thoughts, Effect on others,
Actions, Looks)?
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________

d.
Is there dialogue between characters? Is this dialogue in quotation marks? Are
there tags that are correctly punctuated?
Yes or No
Example: The girl said, Get away from me!

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4- Irony
Does the paper include at least two examples of irony? Write down both examples and name the
type of irony (Verbal, situational, or dramatic).
1.____________________________________________________________
2.____________________________________________________________

5- Imagery

Does the paper include imagery or descriptive words to help the reader experience the characters
experiences? (see, touch, taste, smell, hear)
Yes or no
Name one example: _____________________________________________________________
6 - Grammar?

1. Apostrophe?
2. Run-on, fragment, comma splice? ( COMMA FANBOYS or SEMICOLON or PERIOD)
3. Redundancy?
4. Pronoun/Antecedent? (David...he)
5. Subject/Verb agreement? (The boysare)
7. Spelling?
8. Capitalization?
7- Check for MLA guidelines format, works cited page, double spaced, 12 pt. font, heading, etc.
For example (format):
2-3 pages? Double-spaced? 12-pt font? Times Roman?
For example (heading):
Students name
Ms. Brandli
English 10 - Hr. _____
23 October 2013