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Peer Editing Sheet

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What is the Main Idea of this paragraph?

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Does the topic sentence have a main idea supported by 3 details? Does the sentence after the topic sentence relate to the first detaillisted

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Is there a conclusion sentence? Is the paragraph 5-8 sentences? Do any of the "details sentences" not support the main argument? If JS,

4. fres 5. Yes

explain:

Name at least 3 strong parts of this paragraph:

Name at least 3 weak parts of thiscaiagraph:

If the author changed oj)y 1 thing, what should it be?

If this paragraph was turned in now, how many points out of 25 would you expect it to get?

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