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1st Re-draft Introduction Script Location

Bedroom

Visual
Kaitlin (jeans & hoody) slouch sitting on bed, hands either side of her grasping bed frame, staring at feet. Full shot slowly pans around her Kaitlin looks up (beyond the camera) (camera follows) Kaitlin rushes out of the room and slams the door (on closed door - funded by credential) Full shot: Kaitlin hurriedly running down stairs, sits on the bottom step and puts boots on Close up: Kaitlin ties boot up (production credential) Full shot: Kaitlin opens the front door and runs out, slamming it behind her Anticipatory long shot: Kaitlin running out of house, across the driveway and further up the road, away from the camera (road, traffic, trees background) Hand held head close up shot: Kaitlin running (actor credential) Extreme long shot: Kaitlin running across a road away from the camera Long-mid shot: Kaitlin running towards the camera, turns left into alley, exits frame Extreme longshot: Kaitlin silhouetted in the distance, running on path from right to left of frame until exit (written/ directed by credentials revealed as Kaitlin moves across frame) Low angle shot from between some gravestones: Katilin runs between gravestones towards

Audio
Children shouting

Time (seconds)
15

Shouting intensifies

Door slamming Custom piano chord progression begins, slow and steady Children shouting, doors slamming, feet stamping on the floor (piano chords continue)

Hallway

Hallway Hallway

Street outside house

Car traffic, running footsteps (piano chords)

10

Street

Street

Street

Panting, running footsteps (piano chords continue) Traffic, running footsteps (piano chords) Running footsteps (piano chords) Nature, trees (piano chords)

Field/park

10

Graveyard

Panting, nature, trees, possibly traffic

Graveyard

Graveyard

Graveyard

camera and stumbles to a stop in front of a gravestone, staring off slightly to the right of the frame Head close up: tear rolls down Kaitlins red cheek. Kaitlin sniffling (title credential) Mid shot: Kaitlin collapses onto the floor in front of headstone Head in her hands Head close up: Kaitlin looking at the floor, crying

(piano chords ceases) Nature and trees, possibly traffic 5

5 K: (whisper) How could you leave me here?