Its all in your Head(line)

By Bobby Hawthorne, former UIL Academic Director!

Revised by Jeanne Acton, UIL Journalism Director!

The Headline Writing Contest:!

! Six stories, six headlines 45 minutes (about 7 minutes a story) Count parameters About speed and creativity

Sell the story. A good head involves readers much like a clever ad. Tell the facts. Precise and specific heads inform readers instantly of what they may or may not want to read. Be accurate. All facts, names, numbers, whatever must be correct.

Be objective. Don t editorialize. Simple but precise. No fancy words. No weird constructions. Find the right word to communicate the meaning. Make tone t content. Serious story. Serious headline. Funny story. Funny headline.

Story 2 Write: 1-line headline counting 26-32! !The high school was awarded 21st Century grant programs for the 2011-2012 school year. The federal grant will provide funding for a variety of after-school activities for students.! !The district is excited about this new opportunity, grant director Steve Robbins said. We will be able to offer unique activities like sewing, cooking, outdoor sports and more.! !History teacher Penny White said she plans to offer an extreme frisbee class.! !I asked my classes if they would be interested in the class, and I had more than 20 students raise their hands, White said. We have a lot of athletic students who are not involved in school teams. This will give them a place to belong.! !Freshman Millie James said she participated in 21st Century grant classes at her former school in Dallas.! I took a really cool e-zine class, and we published a magazine for teen girls, she said.!

!The high school was awarded 21st Century grant programs for the 2011-2012 school year. The federal grant will provide funding for a variety of after-school activities for students.! !

High school awarded grant for after-school activities 43!

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District wins after-school grant 32 ! !

Kinds of Head(line)s

 1-line-headline!

Bricklayers engage in mortar combat

 2-line-headline

Backers hot for chili as U.S. official food

 3-line-headline

Principal adds six electives to summer school

 Main/secondary headline

Standing tall
5 -4 guard rises to challenge of leading Tigers

 Main/secondary headline

Driven to destruction
Police play game of cat and mouse with illegal racers

 Main/secondary headline

Whole new ballgame

Nolan Ryan makes smooth transition to job helping oversee state s parks, wildlife areas !

 Main/Secondary headline

Up to date
Senior makes over dad for online auction

 Be as specific as possible in your headline.

Get to the heart of the news.

(not good)

School board discusses items at heated Tuesday meeting

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(better more specific)

2 board members walk out over budget argument

 Avoid semicolons. The headline should be a single sentence, not a collection of sentences.

Hurricane strikes; school swamped; pep rally cancelled

Better:

Pep rally cancelled after hurricane slams into school

 Don t pad headlines with school initials or

dates. Also, avoid initials and abbreviations in headlines. Too vague!

2011 MHS FFA plans to hold annual rodeo

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 More specific!

Willie Nelson to appear at FFA rodeo Saturday

 Put all parts of a verb on the same line

avoid be verbs and linking verbs. Action. Shoot for present tense or future tense. (weak)

Spongebob will attend Mensa meeting purely as spectator

(better)

Spongebob to attend Mensa meeting purely as spectator

 Put all parts of a verb on the same line

Strive for present/future tense, action verbs (weak)

Nichols will not appear in court

(better)

Nichols avoids district court appearance

 No articles. Use a comma instead of and

Heat wave blisters California, Texas

 No clichs. Swimmers dive into season Golfers swing into action Exchange students say Hasta la vista Math Club multiplies Football team tackles opposition Drama Club acts up Military recruiters say, I Want You

 Do not repeat key words or phrases

from the main headline into the secondary headline

Pocket lasers banned

Authorities ban laser pointers !
Just in case you didn t catch it, the repetition is the word laser and ban

Pocket lasers banned

Principal cites injuries, class disruptions

This headline provides twice as much information in the same amount of space! Yippee!

 Avoid "headline-ese" either in the form of simplified

spellings or odd synonyms.

Board to meet Tuesday nite

Vball team destroys Southside in finals

Senior play to continue thru Easter

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 Avoid initials or abbreviations, unless the initials

are instantly recognizable. From the UT-Austin s Daily Texan:

ACLU considers lawsuit for SFA s YCT

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 Avoid passive verbs in headlines.

Internet fraud is cause of worry for administrators

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Better:

Internet fraud concerns administrators

 It is permissible to use implied passive verbs.

Mosquitos (are) biting into summer fun Federal grant (is) renewed
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 Put modifiers and words modified on the same line

Fire guts Fred Astaire Dance Studio, 2 injured

 Put all parts of a verb on the same line

(weak)

Big surprise: Nader will run for president again

(better)

Big surprise: Nader to run for U.S. president again

 Do not end a line with a preposition

Baseball team ready for playoff game, coach says

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 Do not end a line with a preposition

No love lost between Longhorns, Sooners

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 When separating two sentences in a headline,

do so with a semi-colon. Bardwell named Educator of the Year; experts call it sign of plunging standards !

 The main headline should never be dependent on a

kicker or other secondary headline.

(incorrect)

If elected in November, Obama

Says he will get U.S. out of Iraq

(correct)

Getting out
Obama promises to end Iraq war

 Alliteration in headlines should be used sparingly

and in appropriate situations. Acceptable:

New Planetary Puzzlers

A distant, oversize world causes cosmic confusion

Take meowt to the cat show

Annual festival of felines begins today

 Unacceptable:

Cheney s chest chink

Vice president s thumper goes thud

 The headline should reflect the mood of the story.

Band itching for practice as soon as mosquitos killed

 Be careful of word use and misinterpretation.

Bears capture playoff birth

Bush, Kerry butt heads

Panda mating fails; veterinarian takes over

Be sure to eat right before surgery

Kicking baby considered to be healthy

Crowds rushing to see Pope trample 6 to death

Police Say Man Hid Crack in Buttocks

A few more rules ! Avoid contractions Do not end a headline with a period Avoid names unless they are easily recognizable Always use single quotes in headlines

Let s look at a story:

Write: 1-line main headline counting 14-20 and a 2-line secondary headline with each line counting 19-25 When sophomore Dominic Brown was seven years old, he built a three-foot high bike ramp at the bottom of his steep driveway. The ramp lasted one jump before his mother dismantled it.! But that one jump was all Dominic needed to get his adrenaline rushing.! I love to take risks and I love to do stunts on my bikes, he said. It drives my mother crazy. ! On April 7, Dominic will participate in the Texas Extreme Biking Competition in Bandera. He will compete against 75 other teens from across the state in three different challenges.! This is my rst time to compete at this level so I don t expect to win, but I am hoping to place in the top 10, Dominic said. ! Dominic said he is unsure whether his mother will attend the competition.! My mother hates these competitions, he said. In my last competition, I took a pretty hard fall, and she rushed to the eld. It was a little embarrassing. ! Despite the dangers of his sport, Dominic said he s never broken a bone or had stitches from his biking stunts. I guess I am pretty lucky, he said. My buddy Derek broke his collarbone and left arm last month.

Risky business
Sophomore to compete in extreme biking contest

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!20 " !25!

Let s look at a story:

Write: 1-line main headline counting 12-18 and a 2-line secondary headline with each line counting 14-21 Like many high school teens, Shanda Hall fell in love during her sophomore year.! But it wasn t a boy that caught her affection.! Shanda fell deeply in love with the Twilight series of books.! I ve read all of the books three times already, she said. I can t get enough of them. ! To honor her love, Shanda started the Twilight Club so students could get together to discuss the books and movies and plan events. The club meets during lunch on Wednesday in Room 203.! When I rst proposed this club, my friends thought I was a little crazy, Hall said. But now, three months later, we have 25 members. ! Shanda said as more students read the books and see the movie, she expects her club to grow even larger.! Almost everyone who reads the book or sees the movie loves the series, Shanda said.! The next large event for the club is a Vampire Camp Out in April.! We all plan to read our favorite passages by the re, she said. It s not like we believe in vampires, but we believe in the words and messages of the books. ! Junior Christine Razor said she joined the group about a month ago.! Basically, we are a book club/movie club, she said. It s just that we only discuss one particular series of books and movies.

Twilight Zone 13
Book club focuses on vampire series !17 " !17!