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Ridwan works on an oilrig. He is a derrick hand. He works during the night time and then rests during the day time. This is Ridwans diary. Monday 24th March What a night! I had just started working on the derrick. Fifteen minutes later, a huge thunderstorm came. There was heavy rain, and a lot of lightning. I was already up high checking the lift cables so I stayed there until the storm was finished. I had my safety harness on to keep me safe and stop me from falling but I was still worried. fter I finished work, I had sausages, toast and eggs for my breakfast and now I am going to bed. I really need a good sleep. Tuesday 25th March That was a better night! First, I checked that the mud pumps were working properly on the new drill hole. !e"t, I checked all of the other mud pumps too. #uckily, all the pumps were working well. There were ninety eight people on this oilrig last night. I had to keep the all of the e$uipment working well to keep everybody safe. fter my shift had finished, I felt very proud of myself because I did my job carefully. This morning the chef made porridge for breakfast. %um! Wednesday 26th March I decided to go to the gym after breakfast today. &y friend rif asked me to go with him. We e"ercised for an hour then had a shower and some lunch. Today the chef made pasta and salads for lunch. There is another storm coming. I can see the clouds when I look out at the sea. I hope I get a good sleep before I have to work tonight. Thursday 27th March I got very dirty last night! There was another huge storm. 'ne of the pipes cracked and some oil was leaking onto the platform. That made the platform very slippery. I had to fi" the pipe $uickly to stop the leak so nobody would fall over. I got oil all over my coveralls. fter that, I got e"tra dirty because I had to clean the mud tanks. The drilling mud was thick and sticky. I had to wash my hair three times to get it clean. #uckily, there was a lot of hot water in the showers! t last, I can eat my breakfast and go to bed!

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Ridwan works on an oilrig. He is a derrick hand. He works during the night time and then rests during the day time. This is Ridwans diary. Monday 24th March What a night! I had just started working on the derrick. Fifteen minutes later, a huge thunderstorm came. There was heavy rain, and a lot of lightning. I was already up high checking the lift cables so I stayed there. I had my harness on to keep me safe and stop me from falling but I was still worried. fter I finished work, I had sausages, toast and eggs for my breakfast and now I am going to bed. I really need a good sleep. Tuesday 25th March That was a better night! First, I checked that the mud pumps were working on the new drill hole. !e"t, I checked the other mud pumps. #uckily, all the pumps were working well. There were ninety eight people on this oilrig last night. I had to keep the e$uipment working well to keep everybody safe. fter my shift had finished, I felt proud of myself because I did my job carefully. This morning the chef made porridge for breakfast. %um! Wednesday 26th March I decided to go to the gym after breakfast today. &y friend rif asked me to go with him. We e"ercised for an hour. Then we had a shower and some lunch. Today the chef made pasta and salads for lunch. There is another storm coming. I can see the clouds when I look out at the sea. I hope I get a good sleep before I have to work tonight. Thursday 27th March I got very dirty last night! There was another huge storm. 'ne of the pipes cracked and some oil was leaking slowly out of it. The platform was very slippery. I had to fi" the pipe $uickly so nobody would fall over. I got oil all over my coveralls. fter that, I got e"tra dirty because I had to clean the mud tanks. The mud was thick and sticky. I had to wash my hair three times to get it clean! t last, I can eat my breakfast and go to bed!

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Ridwan works on an oilrig. He is a derrick hand. He works during the night time and then rests during the day time. This is Ridwans diary. Monday 24th March What a night! I had just started working on the derrick when there was a thunderstorm. There was heavy rain, and a lot of lightning. I was already up high on the derrick so I stayed there. I had my harness on to keep me safe but I was still worried. fter I finished my work, I had breakfast. I had sausages, toast and eggs. !ow, I(m going to bed. I need a good sleep. Tuesday 25th March That was a better night! First, I checked that the mud pumps were working on the new drill hole. !e"t, I checked the other pumps. The pumps were all working. There were )* people on the oilrig last night. I had to keep everything working well to keep everybody safe. I felt proud of myself. I did my job carefully. This morning the chef made porridge for breakfast. %um! Wednesday 26th March I went to the gym after breakfast with my friend rif. Then we had a shower and some lunch. Today the chef made pasta. There is another storm coming. I can see the clouds out at sea. I hope I get a good sleep before I have to work tonight. Thursday 27th March I got dirty last night! There was a huge storm. 'ne of the pipes cracked and oil was leaking out of it. It was slippery. I had to fi" the pipe $uickly so nobody would fall over. I got oil all over my coveralls. fter that, I got even dirtier because I had to clean the mud tanks. The mud was thick. I had to wash my hair three times. t last, I can eat my breakfast and go to bed!

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Ridwan works on an oilrig. He works during the night and sleeps during the day. This is Ridwans diary.

Monday 24th March What a night! I was working and then there was a big storm. There was rain and lightning. I was up high. I had my harness on to keep me safe but I was still frightened. I had sausages and eggs for breakfast. I am going to bed now. I need a good sleep. Tuesday 25th March That was a better night! I checked that the mud pumps were working. They were all working well. There were )* people on the oilrig last night. I had to keep things working well to keep everybody safe. I felt proud of myself. I had porridge for breakfast. %um! Wednesday 26th March I went to the gym after breakfast with rif. Then we had a shower and some lunch. The cook made pasta for lunch. There is another storm coming. I can see the clouds out at sea. I hope I get a good sleep before I have to work tonight. Thursday 27th March I got dirty last night! There was a big storm. The storm cracked one of the pipes. 'il was coming out of it. I had to fi" the pipe. Then, I cleaned the mud tanks. The mud was thick. I had to wash my hair three times. !ow, I want to eat my breakfast and go to bed!