2 LINGUISTIC LESSON SERIES What Is You Sayin: An Introduction to the Importance of Grammar and Communication
Purpose/Rationale This week long series of mini-lessons is intended for a 10 th grade Language Arts honors course, occurring within the second week of classes. After reviewing class essays written within the first week of the semester, I have noticed a recurring theme within each students paper. A majority of students lack an understanding of the function of language when used for academic purposes, in addition to a lack in basic understanding of sentence structure. The purpose of this lesson is to give students a better understanding of sentence structure, so that they will have an improved command of the use of language and will thus be better able to communicate an idea in a way that is informative and understandable. The mini-lessons will focus on sentence expansion and sentence chunking, including a lesson on punctuation. In this way, the lessons will introduce students to many of the concepts to be developed throughout the school year. Finally, this lesson gives value to all forms of language students may use, while emphasizing the importance of possessing a mastery of academic and formal language, in addition to the benefits this knowledge will have for students in their day to day lives and in the future. By connecting voice to sentence structure, students may better understand their own voice and how to appropriately communicate in their personal writing styles.
Standards CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.9-10.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.9-10.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.9-10.3: Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.9-10.6: Acquire and use accurately general academic and domain- specific words and phrases, sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression. *This standard is more so a yearlong endeavor and will be a continuous focus throughout students studies, as it will be an ongoing effort.*
Objectives Students will be able to Demonstrate an understanding and function of sentence structure Identify incorrect uses of commas and incorrectly structured sentences 3 LINGUISTIC LESSON SERIES Demonstrate use of formal language in academic setting Analyze sentence structures for intent and meaning Materials Writing utensils Composition books Literary examples (from classroom texts, or located online) Computer access Projector Speakers Individual Handouts timer Anticipatory Set This series of mini-lessons will begin with the viewing of a TED Talk video titled Three Ways to Speak English, by Jamila Lyiscott. The speaker goes through a spoken word piece that emphasizes the importance and value of varied dialects, showing her mastery of an island tongue, of urban talk, and of academic language and outlining the fact that each form of language has its own rules, in that each form follows its own grammatical mandate. This video will introduce the idea that language is multi-faceted and has many different forms, all of which carry their own function. In this way, when we begin mastering a more formal language, students will better understand the value of academic language, while not devaluing other forms of language. By treating language in all of its forms with respect, we make the lesson more applicable to students as their natural tongues are not being attacked or devalued in the classroom. By introducing this idea, we teach that there is a place and time for everything, and teach students to know their audience so as to better communicate an idea. The overall intent and use of this video is to start a discussion on language as a whole, so that students can begin to break down and understand language in all its forms and functions.
Teaching Strategy/Procedure/Activity Time Instructor is Doing Students are Doing Day 1: Anticipatory Set (5 minutes): introduce TED talk video
Discussion (7 minutes): Instructor will briefly discuss
Instructor will gain students attention as soon as the bell rings and begin the video. Instructor will take attendance while the video is playing.
Instructor will lead the discussion following the prezi
Students will conclude all conversation when the bell rings and silently watch the video.
Students will quietly pay attention to the lecture and ask 4 LINGUISTIC LESSON SERIES the function of language and introduce idea of different forms of language and the purpose of each form.
Private Work/Closing (3 minutes): Students will work privately (see Appendix A). Instructor will focus on explaining language and its uses as a means of communication, in addition to emphasizing the meaning behind different uses of language, being sure to refer to the video. Instructor will break down transactional, expressive, and aesthetic functions of language, as seen on prezi.
Instructor will outline the closing assignment: You will now choose a sentence from your essay, and rewrite in the style of all three functions of language that we just learned about. Make sure to record your work in your composition books. Instructor will then answer questions as needed and ensure that students are on task. questions when necessary. Students will also take brief notes, in addition to participating in discussion when appropriate.
Students will complete the assignment silently and will only confer with classmates on the subject of the assignment. Day 2: Anticipatory Set (3 minutes): Instructor will give a brief introduction to days work and intent of assignments.
Sentence Expansion (7
Instructor will gain students attention when the bell rings and explain the intent of the mini-lesson: Today we will be working on sentence expansion, meaning that we will practice making simple sentences more complex and detailed. I want you to take a moment and look through last weeks essay, and pick out 2-3 simple sentences, or sentences that seem incomplete or bare of details. Instructor will answer questions as needed.
Instructor will direct students
Students will look through their essays and choose 2-3 simple sentences, and either mark these or copy them into their composition book to be reviewed for later.
Students will actively 5 LINGUISTIC LESSON SERIES minutes): After participating in a class example, students will have the option of working in groups or individually.
Closing (5 minutes): Instructor will answer questions in addition to helping students with private or group work. attention to the third slide of the prezi (Appendix B), entitled Sentence Expansion, and will break down the example: So we look at this sentence, and what do we see? What does this sentence communicate? Does it convey enough information? How can we improve upon this sentence in a way that is meaningful and correct? Instructor will lead discussion, but will let students do most of the work as the instructors primary function will be to record student suggestions on the board.
Instructor will ask students to refer back to their sentences chosen at the beginning of class, and have students expand these sentences like we did in a group. Instructor will answer questions as needed, in addition to keeping students on task. participate in discussion and take notes to be referred back to at a later time.
Students will expand their previously chosen sentences and record their final products I their composition notebooks. Day 3: Anticipatory Set (5 minutes): Students will complete a brief bell ringer that will be displayed via prezi (see Appendix C) that will introduce students to topic of the day.
Sentence Chunking (7 minutes): Instructor will go over sentence chunking examples with students as a class, and then divide students into groups to work further.
Instructor will direct students attention to the projector where the 4 th slide of the prezi will be displayed (Appendix C), and ask that students complete the prompt.
Instructor will first call on a few volunteers and have students write their chunked sentences on the board and then engage class in a discussion on the different ways that the sentences were combined, and how this
Students will silently record their answers in their composition notebooks.
Students will participate in discussion and work with their partners on assignments. Students will ask questions as needed.
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Closing (3 minutes): Explanation of assignment. possibly changed the tone and meaning. The instructor will then move onto the next slide and have students work in groups (the classroom is organized so that the desks are clumped into groups of 4) and students will work on arranging the sentences shown on the projector. After students have compiled their paragraphs, the Instructor will reveal the original paragraph, as seen on the following slide, and read the paragraph aloud.
The Instructor will briefly explain intent of lesson: The reason we did this today is to show that there are many ways to convey information, even if it is the same information. This shows writing style and that this classroom is diverse and filled with a variety of styles. You all have your own voice and this sort of practice will help you to understand your own voice and better use it in your writing. Instructor will answer questions as needed.
Students will sit quietly and listen to the instructor, taking notes if needed, and asking questions when necessary. Day 4: Anticipatory Set (3 minutes): Instructor will have written a sentence without punctuation on the board. Students will insert punctuation where they see fit as a bell ringer.
As soon as the bell has rung, the instructor will direct the students attention to the board where she has previously written a sentence without punctuation: Christine had fastened her eyes to my face, and I was afraid that she would be able to read the least twitch of my muscles. As soon as the timer rings, signifying the end of bell
Students will silently complete the bell work in their composition notebooks.
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Punctuation Discussion (10 minutes): Group discussions and reading aloud.
Closure (2 minutes): Students will revise the comma usage in a sentence from their essay.
work, the instructor will insert the correct punctuation into the sentence.
The instructor begins the discussion, using the bell work as a starting point. Instructor will read the sentence aloud, making sure to pause at the comma. The instructor will then call volunteers to read their own sentences, being sure to pause where they inserted commas. Introduce concept of viewing commas as a marker, or as a breath in conversation. The instructor will be sure to draw connections between writing and speaking throughout the discussion and use student examples, (i.e students supply sentences and the instructor will write the sentence on the board and add various commas in different places to affect reading.) All sample sentences will be read aloud.
Instructor will outline closing assignment: You will choose a sentence from your essay and revise the comma usage.
Students will actively participate in discussion and ask questions as needed. Students will also record notes and copy down example sentences in their composition notebooks.
Students will complete assignment. Day 5: Anticipatory Set (5 minutes): Students will write a brief response to how their views on writing and language have changed, if at all.
Instructor will have previously written prompt on the board: How have your views on writing and language changed this week, if at all? What lessons or concepts have stuck with you? Instructor will begin timer at the start of the bell work and make sure that students are on task until the
Students will silently respond to the bell work in their composition notebooks.
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Language Discussion (7 minutes): Discuss language and writing. Introduce concept of genre theory.
Closure (3 minutes): Assignment of revised essays. timer rings.
Instructor will lead a discussion about language and writing: How do we view writing now? Do we see it as a means of communication, indicative of the ways we speak? When we speak to one another, do we always speak with the same voice? Do you speak to your mother the same way that you would speak to a close friend? In the same sense, would you write an essay the same way you would write a note to a friend? When writing, you must be aware of your audience and you must be able to discern the appropriate voice to use.
The instructor will give overview of assignment: You will revise your essays, keeping in mind some of the concepts we learned this week. The revised copy will be placed in a portfolio and will be accompanied by the rest of your writing that you will complete for the year.
Students will listen to discussion and participate when appropriate. Students will also respect when another and will not laugh at, or speak over their peers.
Students will listen to assignment and ask questions if anything is unclear or misunderstood. Homework/Follow Up As mentioned in the rationale, this set of mini-lessons is intended as an introduction to many of the grammar practices that will be continued throughout the year. As such, students will be continuing these exercises throughout the year as they build upon their skills and understanding.
Assessment Formal: Eventually, students will be required to turn in a copy of their revised papers, utilizing all of the information conveyed through the week and in the following weeks. Papers must show clear improvement and will be graded more carefully. The final version will be saved and placed within a portfolio that students will add to throughout the year that will serve as an indication of students growth throughout the academic year.
9 LINGUISTIC LESSON SERIES Informal: Student participation and completion of in class assignments will be used to verify that students are on task and benefitting from the lesson.
Accommodations Students receiving special education services will be provided the following accommodations as per their IEP: preference seating, more time, individual time with instructor. Lesson is divided between discussion, group work, and private work, so if student is unable to hear or communicate a translator will be provided, if no translator available, the instructor will give student brief introductions before start of class and offer more assistance/accommodations, such as handouts outlining discussion topics and other points discussed in class. ELL students will receive extra time to complete writing assignments and extra time for peer review in order to discuss work with classmates. If student cannot work with another student, they will work individually with instructor, or alone. Handouts in large print will be provided, in addition to recording or written copy of discussion highlighting main points for visual or hearing impaired. Students who complete assignments early will continue to revise their essays, and students who struggle with concentration will be permitted extra breaks and movement between assignments.
Soter, Anna. (2013). Chapter 3 Sentence Play 1, Grammar usage and punctuation: rhetorical tools for literate uses of language. (pp. 54-55). NJ: Pearson Education, Inc.