From: Tyler Reese Subject: Reflection of English 1020 Date: August 3, 2014
Dear Professor McKeever, I am writing to you to provide my reflection on the research analysis process I have undertaken throughout the past seven weeks in your class. In this reflection I hope to better explain why I selected my topic, how I approached my three papers, my fulfillment of the course outcomes and objectives, as well as, my comments on the overall classroom and online experience. As you may recall, I began my research project by first searching for a topic that I found interesting, relevant, fun and would have enough primary source material that I could utilize. After searching through the 100 possible topics I decided to focus my research on Golden Corn: Rock in the 1950s. While at first glance this topic may have seemed like an odd choice for a public health major that never played an instrument or took a music lesson, rock music is a natural part of my everyday life. I have always enjoyed classic Rock music and recently became interested in tracing the roots of the rhythms, sounds, lyrical content and cover songs that lead to the birth of Rock n Roll. Today many people are complaining that todays music is awful and lacks any beat or creativity. However, I believe that if we peel away the surface of songs we can actually trace them back to rock subgenres like punk, progressive rock, psychedelic rock, rockabilly, disco, grunge or even doo-wop. Because of this interest, I decided to dive into the 1950s birth of Rock music and discover how it shaped individuals and society. Reese 2 Once I settled on a topic, I searched for a strong source material on my chosen topic and drafted a literary review of the text. I knew that to be successful I would have to start off very broad with my literary review and then slowly narrow it as I wrote my historical profile and even narrower for my narrative. Upon searching the OhioLink Library system for books on Rock n Roll in the 1950s I stumbled on Glenn C. Altschulers non-fiction book, All Shook Up: How Rock N Roll Changed America (2003). The book was a fascinating and easy read that effectively introduced me to the topic by discussing how Rock music influenced societys views on race, sexuality, pop culture and generational conflicts. In his book, Alschuler mentioned several years including Rock performers like Elvis, Little Richard, Chuck Berry and non- performers like Alan Freed and Dick Clark. It was through reading All Shook Up that I learned about Cleveland native, Alan Freed, and his many contributions to the genre. I found that writing the literary review was by far the easier of the two essays because of its almost book report-like format and style. The profile was also straight forward, however, it was very hard to cut down all the information I had read about Freed to reasonable length. My final paper was a daunting 2,703 words. I was intrigued by Alan Freed because of his Cleveland and The Ohio State University connections. I was inspired by his fearlessness to take on critics and defend his fans. Upon reading several biographies that all seemed to gloss over his involvement in the payola scandal I set out to find a more critical account of this period in Freeds life. I knew if I could find some accounts of his payola hearing or criminal proceedings I would have a great starting point for my narrative assignment. Searching the internet was of little help since no audio or visual records were kept of his hearings, so I turned to several books and found one that provided a lot of first-hand accounts from Alan Freed, his family and his lawyer, Reese 3 Warren Troob. I decided to write my narrative from Troobs perspective because he was able to provide unique insight and expertise on the payola scandal. Overall, I thought the narrative was the hardest paper to write because in recent years my college and high school classes did not focus on creative writing pieces. I struggled with how to lay the story out, how to hold the audiences attention and how to put filler information in that was not expressly provided in the research materials I used. As a student who is used to writing about scientific and historical facts, this freestyle approach to writing caused me great uncertainty and consternation. Ultimately though, I think I was very successful at writing three well written papers in MLA standard English that properly demonstrated my ability to write persuasive, interpretive, and analytical college essays. I also practiced thinking creatively and critically while conducting substantive independent research. With each writing assignment, I exceeded the total minimum word count and utilized the Smarthinking editing process. The positive feedback from my Smarthinking editor helped me make constructive changes to my essays, as needed. Overall, I think I improved my writing skills, gained new research skills and learned a lot about my topic. I thoroughly enjoyed the whole process and no longer see research papers or narratives as an arduous task. I hope I further demonstrated my learning abilities in class by preparing a detailed annotated bibliography, responding to discussion questions online, making a nice Weebly website and participating in class as often as I could. I greatly enjoyed taking English 1020 with you and I hope you enjoyed reading my papers about Rock n Roll in the 1950s. Thanks for a great summer English class!