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4 Writing Style and Text Structure

In this research articles, since the intended audience was public, if a reader that is non-
academic based read this article, he or she may find it is difficult to understandable because the
writing style is generally quite confusing especially when involved several medical words such
as osteoporosis, bone mass density and so on. Moreover, a lot of statistical components were
involved in this article such as forest plots (a type of graph), tables and calculation will make
non-academic readers more confusing. However,, the writing style and overall structure were not
be a problem for readers that is academic based.