Ben Kavalec

Honors English II, 9th Period

January 28, 2008

How I Wrote The Changing of Society in Fahrenheit 451

On October 9, 2007, I began to compose an essay on the topic of the society of

Fahrenheit 451. When I began this task, I simply wrote out ideas that I could later use to

structure sentences for my essay. After a good deal of time, I had a sizeable rough draft

copy of my essay, which was due the next day. I revised and edited my draft extensively

and began to correct my essay on the computer. I changed silly mistakes including “Once

radio, television, and motion pictures were invented…” to “When radio, television, and

motion pictures were invented…”. After much consideration, I felt content with my

work, and on the next day of school turned in my essay of Fahrenheit 451.