I revised my original presentation by simply making it readable.

Some
of my font and color choices were too bright and made some of the
slides hard to read. Some of the visuals overlapped as well and made
some of the slides within my presentation too hard to understand. I also
changed some of the animations, because some of them did not flow
with the other on certain slides. Some of the original slides information
did not flow, meaning that some information in the slide was presented
before it should have been due to the animations I incorporated. In turn,
I fixed the animations and made them flow together in a cohesive
manner.