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AaliyahONeal

RobertArnold
UWRT1101
10September2014

DearRobert,
Ichosethetopicofpoliticsbecauseitwassomethingthattookyearstobecomeactually
literatein.Alotofpeoplethinktheyknowpoliticsbuttheydonot.Manypeopleknowthebasics,
butlikeallotherthings,therearelevelsofknowledgetoknow.Mytwosponsors,Mrs.Morgan
andMrs.Bridgersmademyhighschoolexperienceallthemorebetter,besideshelpingmegrow
intheclassroom.Theyhelpedmecreatememories,soIknewwritingapaperaboutthetwoof
themwouldntbehard.PoliticsissomethingIvegrowntolovebeinginformedabout,andthe
twoofthemaretwopeopleIgrewtolove,period.
Thispaperhadmanysteps.FirstIhadtocreatealiteraryproposal,whichbasically
helpedmegeneratemytopic.Ithendidafewbrainstormingtechniques.Ifreewrote,listed,and
createdafirstdraft.Aftermyfirstdraftwascreated,Iputitinthecorrespondingforumforthe
class,andtwoofmyclassmatesreviewedit.Theysuggestedchangesandwaystomakeit
better.Idecidedtorecreatemyintroductionparagraphtomakeitmoreclearastowhatmy
sponsorshelpedmebecomeliteratein.Iaddedbettertransitionsentences,moredescription,
morescenes,andbettersensorytechniques.
Therewerentmanydifficultieswhenwritingthispaper.Theonlydifficultthingwas
choosingwhattoincludeandwhatnottoduetothelargetimeframe.Icouldhavewrittenat
least10pagesaboutthetwoofthem.
Peerreviewandtheclassactivitieshelpedtremendouslybecauseitgotmymindjuices
flowing.Ithelpedmerecreatescenesinamorevividway.
Thispaperdidntchangeme,buttookmebacktosomegreatmemories.Irecentlywent
backtomyhometownandwhenIvisitedmyoldhighschoolIwenttoseebothMrs.Morganand
Mrs.Bridgers.Itoldthemaboutthepaperandtheybothsmiledeartoear.Theytoldmethey
werehonoredtohaveplayedsuchhugeroleinmyhighschoolcareerandlifedevelopment.
Overall,Ilovemypaper.Ofcourseitisnotperfect,butIamnottheperfectpersonnor
amItheperfectwriter.IlikethefactIcouldtakeastrolldownmemorylane.Thispaperreallyhit
home.Ienjoyedwritingthispaper.