Several consumer protection agencies have filed suit, seeking to bar distributors from advertising

treatments for baldness that brings no discernible improvement and may even result in potential harm.
(b) that bring no discernible improvement and may even prove harmful
(e) that bring no discernible improvement, maybe even resulting in harm

Phenomenon plural phenomena

On account of = because of, but prefer because of to on account of because of being shorter.
credited with credit person with accomplishment (use this when person comes first)