Toshiba Satellite M35X-S114 Peer Review

Device Page

Is the URL in the correct format? It should look like: Yes

www/ifixit.com/device/Device_Name
Does it include thorough background information on the device, as well as information
on how to identify the device? Yes
Does it have at least three external links? Yes
Is the device picture clear, well lit, and in the correct 4:3 aspect ratio? Yes
To check the aspect ratio, click on the "Image metadata" link on the top left of the
device picture.
Does the page contain correct grammar and punctuation? Yes
Does the page contain Troubleshooting, Background and Identification, and Additional
Information sections all in the proper formatting? Yes

Troubleshooting Page

Is the URL in the correct format? It should look like: Yes

www/ifixit.com/wiki/Device_Name_Troubleshooting
Does the page have at least five troubleshooting topics/problems? Yes
Does each topic have thorough explanations of the causes, symptoms, and solutions for
each problem? Yes
Does the page link to all of the device's repair guides in applicable solutions? Yes
Is there correct grammar and punctuation throughout the page? Yes
Are the headers and subheaders all formatted correctly? Yes
Does each topic follow the correct order of: Yes
Symptom
Cause
Solution?

Repair Guide Pictures

Are they well lit? Yes

Is every action portrayed with hands in the shot? Yes, but it would be more helpful if the
pictures were taken from the same perspective.
Did they use appropriate markups for screws, clips, and fasteners? Yes
Are their pictures taken on a clean background? Yes
Is the white balance set so that the background looks white and all of the colors look
natural? Yes
Are the pictures in focus? Yes

Repair Guide Text

Does every guide use correct grammar and punctuation? Yes, but on step 3 on the RAM
guide, replace there is a total to there are a total.

Are the steps clear and concise? Yes

Do the bullets describe exactly how to do something, as opposed to simply what to do?
No. The fact that you are using use at the start of each bullet is evidence of this. Start
with vigorous verbs and avoid using specific fingers.
Do the guides correctly identify all tools and parts? Yes
The blue tool should be called a "plastic opening tool" and the black tool a
"spudger."
The motherboard should only be called a "logic board" if the device is made by
Apple.

Repair Guide Miscellaneous

Are the prerequisite guides used correctly? Yes

No steps should be repeated.
Are all guides called "replacement" guides (unless specifically told otherwise)?
Did they make sure not to include reassembly instructions? Yes
Did they list all screw lengths (measured to the nearest 0.1 mm) and head types? Yes
Do the bullet colors match their corresponding markup colors? Yes
Are the caution/note/reminder bullets only used at necessary times?
Did they make sure not to write the words "Caution, Note, or Reminder" after the
special bullets? Yes
Did they only use tools for their intended purposes? Yes
Is the "Details" section completed for all guides? No. It was not complete for the RAM
guide.
The conclusion should read, "To reassemble your device, follow these instructions in
reverse order." Yes