Progress Report iFixit Group 2

by Robert McLaughlin

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Progress Report iFixit Group 2

GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

95

Instructor
I probably would have used bullet points f or some of
this content, but you've got all the major points.
Great job, team!

/100

PAGE 1

Text Comment.
QM

great start

Unclear
Your construction of this sentence clouds your meaning.
Additional Comment the scarcity "conf irmed solutions" isn't clear

QM

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Problem in Parallel Form:
Coordinate ideas should be expressed in parallel f orm. All expressions that are similar in
content and f unction should be expressed similarly.

Text Comment.

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RUBRIC: IFIXIT PROGRESS REPORT RUBRIC

CRIT ERIA 1

Advanced

Form & Organization

ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or

do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING

Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT

Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED

Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content

concisely, specif ically, and accurately

CRIT ERION 2

Advanced

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

T he report f ails to describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work; the group seems in danger of not f inishing the project on time.

DEVELOPING

Descriptions of the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work may be
vague; evidence of the group's ability to complete the project on time isn't quite
convincing.

PROFICIENT

Some specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work adequately; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

ADVANCED

Specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work
directly and aptly; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

CRIT ERION 3

Prof icient

Appearance
ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
the report.

DEVELOPING

White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT

White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED

White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4
Language

Advanced

ABSENT/BELOW
BASIC

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability.

DEVELOPING

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract

f rom meaning.

PROFICIENT

Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning.

ADVANCED

Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence variety.