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Hook It is known to be more resourceful if you use material and object that can help
you save and use less power.
Transition Therefore, throughout this paper it will use a material that can help reserve
energy, such as solar panels.
II. Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence In the article, What is Green Construction is was emphasizing the
main points and covering the main topics for the project we are doing which is about
solar power.
Evidence For example, it states green building design and construction is the
opportunity to use our resources more efficiently, while creating healthier and more
energy-efficient homes.
Analysis This quote is stating that green construction is used to create and design a
healthier and more efficient way to create homes and other resources a healthier and more
assertive way.
Conclusion Sentence III. Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence Evidence Green building is the practice of creating structures and using processes that
are environmentally responsible and resource-efficient throughout a building's life-cycle from
siting to design, construction, operation, maintenance, renovation and deconstruction.
Analysis This quote is stating that green buildings may incorporate sustainable
materials in their construction made from renewable resources to create healthy indoor
environments with minimal pollutants .
Evidence This practice expands and complements the classical building design
concerns of economy, utility, durability, and comfort. Green building is also known as a
sustainable or high performance building.
Conclusion Sentence - Therefore, this source was emphasizing that green buildings is
used to reserve.
IV. Body Paragraph 3
Topic Sentence This source provided information on how much precipitation the state
of Pennsylvania had from the year of 2013-2014. It also provided me with how much

precipitation that Pennsylvania has also had in the month of January 2015.
Evidence For example, the amount that the state had in the year of 2013 was between
40-60 inches of rain. Also, some areas have had no more than 25-40 inches.
Analysis In addition, in 2014 the state had between 25-60 inches of rain (in the middle
region),and some areas have had between 60-70 inches. (mainly in the eastern region).
Evidence The credits provide everything (well at least I believe is everything) that the
website has used to gather its information.
Conclusion Sentence Furthermore, January 2015, the state has had 1 to 3 inches. Some
areas have had a little over 8 inches (mainly in the eastern region). In addition, it also
provides a brief description of each source that is listed and the websites to the sources to
the sources if one was available.

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