Omran Aljubarah

English 111
March 19

I.

Introduction to major research paper.

A- My topic is who cellphone in our modern era become so important for people.
B- My thesis for rough drift is how people have relationship with cellphone. And
people's addiction to the cellphone and the causes for the cellphone and how
cellphone bad for people.

II-

Body of the paper

A. Relationship: my thesis is that my cellphone help me in many ways.
1- Connect me with family and friends.
2- Organized my colander.
3- Have an Entertainment for some apps.
4- My conclusion kind of talking about cellphone from that point I can connect it
to the other paper.
B. Concept analysis: my thesis is (The elements that college analyzed are about their
competence, creativity, and character.
1- Competence and how many people are competence in the computer.
2- Creativity and how some students creativity in programs and technology.
3- Character and how people have different character or personality.
4- My conclusion describe how technology intrude to our life and become really
important.
C. Causes/effect: in my thesis I show how bad computer and cellphone will causes
many people in the community.
1- How computer cause physical problems.
2- Health problems.
3- Keep us far from community and not doing some activities in the community
4- In my conclusion I summarized everything about computer and cellphone in
our community.

III-

Conclusion: in my conclusion the reader will realize that cellphone or computer not

always good for our community and how bad and good things we can get from computer and
cellphone.

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Cellphone in our modern era become so important for people. A lot of people cannot
imagine their life without their devices. There are many kind of cellphone and different people
use those cellphones. Some people use smart phone and some people use a normal phone but all
these cellphones are important for those people who use them. However, people dont realize
using too much cellphone can get them in trouble in their life. In my rough drift I will talk about
how people have relationship with cellphone, and people's addiction to the cellphone and the
causes for the cellphone and how cellphone bad for people.

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Similar to most people I depend on my cell phone every day. Without having a cell
phone it would be very difficult to talk with my family and friends. Also, cell phones make it
easier to stay organized with everyday events. Whether its the news, or just when Im bored my
cell phone helps me in many ways.
Some people have regular phones and some have smart phones. With a regular phone you
cannot do as much. I have a smart phone so it gives me the advantage to use apps like tango or
whats app to talk with my family and friends back home. Saudi Arabia is really far away, so
when I want to make a phone call I buy a calling card with minutes on it. This really helps for
emergencies and special events like weddings.
Another reason I use my cell phone every day is to help me stay organized. I use my
calendar to keep track of the days, holidays, birthdays, and weekly schedules. The calendar here
is a lot different than at my home. If I dont have a computer around me or Im busy I just use
my phone to check my emails and that helps me keep my homework for my classes organized.
For example, if Im sick and have to miss a day of school I can use my phone to see what I
missed.
Also, another good use I have for my cell phone is it lets me take pictures of all the
places I have been in the United States. I like to have pictures for everything I have done. I have
pictures with friends, family, classmates, and with my girlfriend. I'm also able to take videos
with my phone. I really like to travel so when I do, my phone always comes in handy.
Furthermore, my phone helps me to translate things I dont fully understand.
In addition, my cell phone keeps me up to date about whats going on back at my home in Saudi
Arabia and here in America. My cell phone lets me play videos, and music whenever I want. My

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phone allows me to check the weather for anywhere I go. When is snows or rains a lot Im able
to check ahead of time so that's good for when I have to drive to school or to other places.
Many people around the world cannot go a day without cell phones. Also, students in college use
the phone a lot which make a lot of things easier. Since scientists have made the phone, it
improved life and it has made it easier to do things without going out of your home. This is how
technology has made daily life simple for a lot of people with busy schedules. However, college
students have a lot of dream that they are going to do it after done with college. So, some
students want be a business man or an engineering in the future but when the college didnt agree
with some students to be business or engineering because for bad greed was for high school.
However, colleges investigate with these students and how they do in their classes so they
analyzed three elements. The elements that college analyzed are about their competence,
creativity, and character.
Today, some of the companies that you going to try to find a job on it the first thing they
look at are how competence you are in the computer or basically technology. Many students
work hard and keep trying to learn everything in the computer and how to use it.

Because

people can't go without technology one day if we think about it. So, our society forces us to be
close to the technology.
Second, they look how students are creativity and some skills they might have. Some people
know how to use programs in the computer that companies looking for worker. Technology is
good way to improve our skill in good way to get a lot of benefits in the future. So, there are
some students how have a good talent in some programs that might use in collage help in his
filed job. Also, this talent helps in their rail life to be successful. For example, when you going

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to look for job put in your resume that you have learn some specific program in the computer
that would help in the job.
Finally, they look what type of personality that students have or what character have.
Because if we think about ages up 50 years old they dont really care about fancy cellphone all
they care about is cellphone to make a call and texting. On the other hand youngest people in our
community care which kind of cellphone they going to use and most of them they would use
smart phone. It's important to know what your worker think about what kind of problems they
might have. Each student in college has different character and thats completely different to
their job. However, must have a good character to have good job and better future.

Students start college and them worry about their future and what's going to happen after
graduate from college. Many students are dreaming for a lot of things in their future life and if
they going to retch that dream in the future. Students are making sure that they have a good
history for future and good skills. Even, some students practice their skills with the technology.
The technology at this time has a lot of meanings for people. Also, the technology has become
the most important thing in the world. It has been used by most people, including adults and
children whether the use of personal or business. The technology has changed the world in both
positive and negative ways. According to MSC, Mobile phone and adolescents- addiction a
mindful check in The technology today is used in many places such as schools, jobs, and
homes. The technology has made people smooth and easy in their work. On the other hand, there
are many devices belong to the technology such as: computers, cellphones, and games etc. Cell
phones and computers cause negativity in three critical elements, which are physical problems,
lack of exercise, and it takes away from communication.

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Supposedly the most common negative effect for technology like computer and cellphone
is physical problems. Physical fitness is important to the future of people and without this fitness
that going to causes problems for people. The most physical problems are causing people in their
health body. For example, some people spend most of their time sitting improperly and not
straining their necks to see the screen or their hands to use the keyboard. According to Better
Health Channel, back and neck pain, headaches, and shoulder and arm pain are common
computer-related injuries. Such as, muscle and joint problems can be caused worse by poor
workstation (desk) design, bad posture and sitting for long periods of time. As a result, these
people in the future will be more likely to suffer from health problems. If we notice at this time
many people get a back pain and maybe get (desk) in their back from the computer or get
problems in their eyes. However, some people curve their body in front of the computer for long
of time and that will result in a sharp pain in the upper part of the back, especially at the neck and
shoulders. There are some solutions to remedy these problems, such as taking a break every
while and walking, supportive sitting in a chair for their back, and making the screen the same
level of their eyes. All these solutions help protect their bodies or reduce the physical problems
in future.

Secondly, people spend their whole day using cellphones, computers, and video games
will not have enough time to do exercise. Exercise will result in good for health and a long life.
Exercise for one hour in the day is enough to protect people's bodies from diseases. Someone
will have deteriorating health and an increasing weight, and of course, some diseases. According
to University of Colorado at Boulder participants who slept five hours a night for five nights
consumed more calories, especially after-dinner snacks, than those who slept for nine hours. "If

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you're awake longer and later, it leaves you more time to eat, and often your choices are not the
best quality at those hours'. Thats means, people should not use their devices while they are
going to sleep to be in good health. So, people who has addicted to their devices they have
increase in their weight because they sit long time to use the cellphone and computer. Thats
cause them eat a lot of junk food without feeling or control the amount of their eating. Since all
these words emphasize the importance of exercising every day to get away from the problems in
future.
Finally, the cellphone and computer takes some people away from communication. Think
about sitting for a long time of period in the cellphone or computer what are the causes. Before
the invention of the cellphone and computer, there was a lot of communication between people
in the community. For example, many years ago people got to know each other by meeting up
and hanging out but now there are many people how made a relationship online just by texting in
social media . Now, cellphone and many devices cause a lot of problem between you and your
partner. According to Ian Kerner, Technology allows us to be constantly connected to the world,
but it can also make us even more disconnected from each other. In fact, two recent studies show
that cell phones can have a negative impact on close relationships. Also cellphones distract our
attention from each other or ever in school. According to Ian Kerner "cell phones can distract our
attention from the present moment and that's a problem, considering the results of the mobile
mindset Study, a recent survey that found three out of five U.S. smartphone users don't go more
than hour without checking their phone". However, we have to be aware that cellphone can
causes a lot of problems in our relationship.
Cellphones and computers will remain an important thing for all people. Every day the
cellphone becomes more addictive for people. Frequent use of the cellphone impacts people in

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the following factors: physical problems, lack of exercise, and it takes away from
communication. People need for their future good physical health, exercise, and communication.
When the cellphones and computers appeared in the world, all people's lives changed. It is clear
that the cellphone has some serious detrimental effects and causes people problems. Every
communities should have some activities to let people keep away from technology for little bit.

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