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though the points may have. These flaws led to a confusing organization and may have been hard
for the reader to coherently follow my argument. I fixed this lack of definitive organization in
my publish-ready paper.
Lastly, the challenges present in writing this paper were the use of Mike Roses voice in
order to respond to James Baldwins excerpt on education. After many times reading and
analyzing Roses essay, I had to figure out a way to use his style and craft in order make an
argument. It was important to realize that in essence, Roses essay was an argument; he was
calling for an end to an inadequate vocational program by showing the need to encourage
students. Using the techniques Rose used in his argument, I was able to model mine after his,
which led to a unique style. This method of writing an argument was familiar to me but I had
never actually written it this way. The challenge was to write a cogent argument through the use
of personal experiences and anecdotes rather than impersonal objectives.