Mateo Quiroga

Ms. Thompson
AP Language, Block 2, Skinny A
18 May 2015
DAP: Creative Piece (AP+ DNA and Research Final Paper )
Throughout my creative paper (The Effects of Vitamin D3 on the
Protein Concentration of Sleep-deprived Danio rerio Brains - and Its
Implications Regarding Aggregation Associated Neurodegenerative Diseases)
strengths and weaknesses are evident. After carefully going back through the
final publish ready version of my paper, I was able to highlight the strengths
and weaknesses. It is imperative for authors to reflect on previous pieces in
order to understand which pieces deserve praise or additional polishing.
The paper properly transitioned from an MLA guideline paper to an APA
guideline paper. The transition took out any florid speech that would be use
in MLA papers. This type of paper calls for a more technical writing that is
free of flowery words - extremely straightforward. Though at times it was a
bit cryptic, the paper did attempt to explain each and every scientific term
thoroughly.
The paper provided with a plausible solution to degenerative diseases,
but the paper lacked a proper analysis method. This mistake deterred from
the credibility of the paper and created a dubious paper in which the authors
were not entirely sure of the implications and results.