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ORIGINAL WP1
SUBMISSION:
AN OBSERVATION OR
QUESTION I
RECEIVED FROM
DEPIERO OR A
CLASSMATE:
THE CHANGE(S) I
MADE TO WHAT I
INITIALLY WROTE:
Semicolons separate
two complete
sentences.-DePiero
Thesis statement:
The separation of my
papers structure into
three separate
ideas/conventions
instead of three different
sources
by Idea 1, 2, then 3?
Topic sentence:
my paper.
Reworded:
Average respondent.
Such articles The
next group of online text
was
Average in terms of
age? Weight? Height?
Im not sure what you
mean here-DePiero
Paragraphs 1, 2 and 3 in
the original document
idea-at-a-time bits.DePiero
Original concluding
sentence:
Understanding the way
the conventions of a
genre interact allows
one to deduce for
themselves which
position is the most
factual, which is more
focused on opinions,
which provides solely
basic information on the
topic, and how all of
these articles come
together to provide an
understanding of the
dire situation at hand
and the necessity of a
quick and effective
solution.
Comments from
classmates, and my
roommate, and also
DePiero, on a lack of
argument within my
paper.
Nothing really being
proved here.- Emily,
my roommate