UOI1:Whereweareinplaceandtime:SCIENTIFICDISCOVERIES

SummativeTaskDescription

Studentswill:
writea1stpersonaccountofascientistscontributiontohumankindsscientificunderstanding.
usemultiplebooks(3ormore)forsources

Mystoryaboutmyscientist,LouisPasteur

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describes
:
theunderstandingatthetimethescientistwasalive.
whomadethediscovery
howthediscoverywasmade
whatwaslearnedfromthediscovery

describes
the
impactof

chosenscientistsworkonhumankinds
understandingofthephysicalworld.

Skills

includes
abibliographywith:
3ormorecitationsinthecorrect
MLAformat
allcitationsinAlphabeticalorder

IDEAS

communicatesaclearmainmessageand
interestingideas
thatare
supportedbysmalldetailsinmy
writingtoshowratherthantellmywriters
whatisgoingon.

ORGANISATION

Uses
an
enticingintroduction
,andsatisfyingconclusionand
sensible
paragraphsfororganisation.

WORDCHOICE

Includes

creativeandinterestingadjectivesthatgivesdetailsandhelps
myaudiencetocreatementalimageswhiletheyread.

Show
t
heattitude
,feelingsand
thoughtsofmyscientistashetellshis
story.

Makesuseof

capitalletters,fullstops,commas,tensesandother
punctuationandgrammarcorrectlytohelpmyaudiencereadit.

Flowsnaturally
withshortandlonger
sentencesthatdoesnotcontaintoo
manyortoolittleideas
.Thereare
norunonsentencesandIusedlinking
wordstocombineshortsentences.

Is
presented
witha
readableinterestingfontnobiggerthansize14and
includessomepicturesand
colours
tomakeitattractivetotheaudience.

Knowledge

Understanding

VOICE
CONVENTIONS
SENTENCE
FLUENCY

PRESENTATION

Writeyourfinalstoryonthenextpage:

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By:Louis6/8/15

no!

The great discovery

I raised out of my bed and stretched my arms,

while I was yawning. My name is Louis Pasteur.
I live in Dole in a country called France. It
was very noisy outside my mansion because
people with cameras and TV station were
outside my door. I was angry because all the
people were standing on his grass and because
they were making a lot of noise.
That afternoon at 1:30pm of march the 14th, I
was working on a vaccine for rabies and
anthrax. On the way to university he spotted a dog biting a young boy, but I
didnt stop because I was going to be late for teaching at the university of
strasbourg. I went to the front double door but the door knobs had super
glue so I went through the window.
I was inside and working out what my classes are going to do. I hated
everyone who was in my class because they all didnt do their work. I was
thinking and couldnt stop. I was really terrified And curious why I was stuck
thinking. Maybe, just maybe, I might have fainted but if I fainted it was a
long time or was I just thinking that. I was talking to myself.
At 2:01 pm, on the same day I woke up in the hospital. The doctor came to me
and said You fainted for thirty minutes and that you need to stay in hospital
for one day to do some test, you can look at people who are staying over
night because I heard that you have been working hard on a vaccine for
rabies. To make the use on my time I went around the hospital to interview
people with rabies so I can find a way I can make the vaccine. Suddenly I
realize that all of the people I interviewed were saying that they fainted for
thirty minutes as well so that means I have rabies too and im staying
overnight instead of going home. I did not know that I was going to have

rabies so I checked with the doctor to say that I have rabies.he did some
blood tests and scans and he said that I didnt have any rabies so that was a
relief.
I started to look for anyone else who had rabies, as soon as I said that I
bumped into the kid that got bitten by the dog and I didnt stop. I said to the
boy in a soft voice that did you get bitten by a dog. The boy replied with a yes
and I have blood tests that proved I have rabies and now I have to stay in a
isolated room all by myself, UNtil you come up with a
vaccine the boy said.
In the middle of the night I was fast asleep.
meanwhile the boy was changing my test results. In
the morning I woke up and had a different doctor who
said that I have rabies. I said you must have got mixed
up between the boy and me because im not nine years
old and I didnt have a x-ray. The doctor actually did
believe me and that someone changed the results of my
tests. I thought someone who changed the results of my tests want me to
stay here. I said to the doctor when can I go home, he said that you can leave
to go home at 10:00am and its 9:00 am now so you can go around again to
see who changed the results your tests. Trying not to waste my time I went
around the place and had a look at everyone. The next minutes go past and
the boy who I bumped into yesterday said are you staying here because on your
tests results it says that you got rabies. I said in a dark voice How do you
know that only me and the doctors are allowed IN my room. The kid said I
want to get better and be the first one!
If you say so I yelled. I pulled out my little tube that I have been working
on all this time. I gulped and said Open your mouth and your rabies will be
gone by tomorrow. Thank you so much the boy said. The doctor said that I
could go now and make the vaccine for rabies.

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Shaw,Ron.
GreatScientistsandDiscoveries
.Carlton,Vic:CurriculumCorporation,2003.Print.