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An Evaluation by Michelle Sou
go into specifics about what makes being a beginner writer even more
challenging when it comes to the issue at hand. Integrating your
quotes will also present your points more coherently and effectively.
#2 suggest ways to clarify the overall judgment and
strengthen the supporting argument: Overall, you should clarify
your supporting arguments with more commentary after the quotes.
This is especially helpful in paragraphs 2, 4, 5, and part of 6. For
paragraph 6, you should include a quote from Piphers Chapter 6:
Diving In in order to show that she is not fond of the term writers
block, and then comment on that to show why that reflects how helpful
her writing is for people who do have writers block. Always end your
paragraphs with your own words, not quotes (paragraph 2).
and Plotniks connection to all of it. Again, more of Piphers words, and
more commentary following it would make this a very convincing
refuting argument.
#4 suggest how the organization might improve: I liked your
organization very much, and cant say I would suggest your
paragraphs to change order in any way. I would probably recommend
changing the paragraph with the topic sentence believing yourself
and knowing that your person has something to make it about what
part of Piphers book is especially helpful in doing so. I agree its
important, but how is Pipher integral in learning how to do so?