Amanda Duffy

ENC 2135-07
Project #3

Project #3 Draft 2 Reflection

After receiving the feedback from my peers on how to correct and revise both of my genres, I
made some changes to each. I changed the formatting on the FSU Law School Application
Checklist from bullet points to numbers to show a chronological order of the steps needed. I also
added certain dates and deadlines that would apply to certain bits of application information in
this genre. Also, I bolded and highlighted certain things from draft 1 to draft 2 on the application
checklist. I learned that there are certain formatting and design techniques you can incorporate
into certain genres that gravitate and sustain the attention of your intended audience. (I will
explain the specifics later in my rationales) In regards to the second genre, a PowerPoint
presentation, I revised draft 1 to draft 2 by adding certain design dimensions with the intention of
making the genre more approachable and aesthetically pleasing. Through the feedback provided
by my instructor however, it made the genre difficult to comprehend because of the distracting
colors. My professor also gave me instruction to remove the (what are supposed to be) textboxes
on the far right side of my checklist, and add a nice graphic on the top of the genre to make it
look professional. I was also recommended to change some of the information in my PowerPoint
to not replicate directly from my application, but to add other informational things about the
profile of a FSU law school student, and what is expected of them, and how to successfully
become accepted in different situations. Im looing forward to perfecting my third and final
draft!