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On the other hand, the amount spent on the remaining goods was higher in France. Above
350,000 was spent by the French on computers which was slightly more than the British who
spent 300,000. Neither of the countries countries spent much on perfume which accounted for
200,000 of expenditure in France but under 150,000 in the UK.
Comments: The report has been organised into logical paragraphs with flexible use of
linking. The overview is very clear with key features well highlighted. Accurate data is
used to support sentences in the body paragraphs. There is a range of complex
structures and vocabulary is use flexibly. This is an estimated band score 9 writing task
1 report for the academic paper.