+It is time to REVISE your draft

Use your ARMS! When you revise you:

Add words
Remove words
Move words or lines
Substitute words

+It is time to EDIT your draft

Use CUPS! When you edit you check:

Capitalization
Usage (does it make sense?)
Punctuation
Spelling

Lets do some writing by making a 10-line

BIOPOEM
Your first name
_____ of _____
Who is adjective, adjective, adjective, adjective
Who feels adjective, adjective, adjective
Who loves to verb, verb, verb
Who wants to learn/try verb, verb, verb
Who fears noun, noun, noun
Who would like to see noun, noun, noun
Who lives place / how
Your last name

My example:

BIOPOEM
Julia
Daughter of Susan, Sister of Daphne
Who is adventurous, friendly, creative and sentimental
Who feels happy, fortunate, inspired by Colombia
Who loves to travel, be with family, take photos
Who wants to learn Portuguese, learn to sail and try hang gliding
Who fears failure, scorpions and running out of coffee
Who would like to see Machu Picchu, the Galpagos and leopard
cubs
Who lives in sunny, tropical Barranquilla
Hakstian

BIOPOEM Prewriting
What are
do you
you like?
see?

What do

What

you like to do? want to

How would
What would
What
are
your friends you like to try?
afraid of?
describe you?