Name :Louis Nzegbulem

Ao1:
Analysis.
How well have
you understood
the work of
other
photographers?

Ao2:
Progression
from 1st to 2nd
response. How
have the photos
been refined?

Unit: 1.5 Force

Task:

Teachers comments:

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

The artist sections that you have completed are good but the
analysis is a little brief. You must use the word frames
provided and make sure to use photographic vocabulary when
analysing images. It is important that you think about all the
different parts that make up the image. Also place your
analysis in column under each image.

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Nadav Kander (3 photos)

As Above more in-depth analysis is needed also you have

picked the wrong project images you should be looking at his
Half-life series.

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Francois Delfosse (3 photos)

As Above more in-depth analysis is needed.

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Bernd And Hilla Becher (3 photos)

N/A

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Force of nature

A very short section where are you contact sheets and your
second response work.

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Applied force

Well done a good first response you demonstrate a good

understanding of the task and the technique needed to
achieve a successful outcome. However at present you only
have one response there should be two the second showing
refinement and development.

Imposing architecture

The images you taken are good and have an imposing feel. I
think that this section definably has room for expansion and I
suggest you look at the gas towers work of Beatrice Piesold
for inspiration. These images were taken in wood green
behind the shopping city.

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3 strands

The two strands that you have completed are interesting but
where is your third one. Also please be more aware of your
framing and composition in many of your deconstruction series
you have cut off parts of the helicopter please make sure you
are taking your time and really think about the image.

TAo3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs.
How has the
subject been
recorded?

You are beginning to demonstrate an understanding of the

techniques looked at in class but more refinement needs to
take place between your first and second responses.

Composition

On the whole your composition needs work as I mentioned

above be careful when cropping making sure the entire image
is captured.

Location and subject matter

You need to be more creative with your choice of locations

push yourself beyond the obvious local buildings.

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Ao4:

3 final images

Where are these?

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Final Piece,
How have you
presented and
realised your
unique
photographs?

Grade: D WAG: D

Target: D

Final Comment:
A sound project but you must go back and make the changes that I have mentioned; this will raise the grade of the
project.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.