Sie sind auf Seite 1von 2

Name: Molly Fenn

Ao1:
Analysis.
How well have
you understood
the work of
other
photographers?

Ao2:

Unit: 1.5 Force

Task:

Teachers comments:

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

The artist sections that you have completed are excellent The
analysis is really strong and the fact that you have also
created shoots based on the artist work really makes this a
strong section.

T+

Nadav Kander (3 photos)

Excellent analysis and understanding of his work your vocab is


strong and demonstrates a strong understanding of the
photographic process.

T+

Francois Delfosse (3 photos)

As above your vocab is strong I would like a little more about


the individual photographs though just improve this section
further.

T+

Bernd And Hilla Becher (3 photos)

N/A

Force of nature

A really strong section with excellent location, the Spanish


location is particularly strong. The work of John Divola could
be used as a further link artist in this section.

T+

Applied force

Again a good section that is helped by the fact you have gone
beyond the number of responses asked for. The work of Wes
Naman could link in well to the celotape section

T+

Imposing architecture

The mixture of buildings shown on the second response really


works well in this section. It also demonstrates excellent
refinement. The artist and me section is excellent well done.

T+

3 strands

Of your three strands I think the decay strand is the strongest


I think you could possible visits one more location to finish this
section off. There are lots of rusted cars in cold fall woods that
other students have photographed (see images below) this
could work well for you. Ask Izzy for the location as she has
visited it.

Progression
from 1st to 2nd
response. How
have the photos
been refined?

T+

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs.
How has the
subject been
recorded?

You demonstrate a outstanding understanding of the


techniques looked at in class and clearly refine your work in
all of your second and third responses.

Composition

Your composition is very good with the decay images you


could experiment a little more with depth of field blurring the
background to draw the viewer attention to the decay.

Location and subject matter

Excellent locations and subject matter used well done

3 final images

Where are your final images?

Ao4:

T+

T+
T

Final Piece,
How have you
presented and
realised your
unique
photographs?

Project Grade: A WAG:A-

Target: A*

Final Comment:
Well done Molly an outstanding project but please put up your final images as I cant give you full marks until you do..

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by


contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and


selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to


their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response


Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.

Das könnte Ihnen auch gefallen