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English 3059
Professor Cook
22 October 2015
Rhetorical Analysis
Textual Perspective
Starbucks utilizes a vernacular, yet unique, language in its website. This
stylistic nuance meets the reader where he or she is. Primarily, this is seen
via contractions, which serve to give the site a conversational tone. For
instance, they write, A loyalty program thats all about you and Now
theres always time for a Starbucks coffee run.2 These quotes are found on
the main page of the sitea sort of first impression to the reader. Yet,
beyond this simple conversational language, the site piques the readers
interest with a few poignant vocabulary words. Describing Starbucks
Panama coffee, the writer tags the blend as having praline sweetness (see
Figure One)2. The word praline gives an exotic sheen to a coffee that could
just as easily have been simply called sweet. This same two-sentence
description also uses alliteration when it states that the coffee features
flavor notes of floral.2 These ordinary words become poetic and project an
almost ethereal view of the coffee that may, or may not, be merited. The site
also uses the word exclusive twice, subtly hinting that the viewer is special
for viewing this site (See Figure One)2. Or, conversely, that this site is special
for its restricted offers. This also serves to be invitational to the reader,
though, and not standoffish, since it is being proffered to the viewer like a
whispered secret.
Figure One: This picture, found on the main page of Starbucks.com shows the sites casual
language and you language. Here, both uses of the word exclusive can be found (one at
the top and the other toward the bottom).
This emphasis on uniqueness flows directly into the companys use of you
language. You language places a sentences emphasis on what the
customer receives, versus what the customer has to give. In other words,
Starbucks places customer needs as the focal point of the website. This is
also seen in Figure One. The site boats of One-of-a-kind Starbucks coffee,
delivered right to your door.2 The customers reading this understand that
there is an implied [that we have] delivered right to your door embedded
in the sentence. But the intentional lack of these words keeps the focus on
what the consumer receives, not on the we delivering it. This is an appeal
to pathos because it makes the reader feel important and valued. The site
might make a reader feel that his or her needs and opinions are of upmost
value to corporate Starbucks. Though this is probably not completely
accurate, using you language promotes this direction of thought in
consumers.
Small paragraphs make reading at a glance easy, which is generally what
consumers want. Web readers often scan documents in second, and
Starbucks caters to this type of perusing. The three green dots in Figure Two2,
together a sort of visually appealing tricolon, give consumers a lot of
information in a condensed amount of screen space. The diagram lets the
reader know that he or she can now order Starbucks online and avoid long
waits at coffee rush hours. Though no specifics are given, all of the
information provided reaches the scanning eyes of the consumer and invites
him or her to seek out more. The conventional tabs at the top of the
webpage also cater to quick browsing. Starbucks website holds a lot of
information, but is chaptered off into headings (the tabs) and then, further,
all of the subheadings underneath of those2. The tabs make browsing the site
simple and to the point.
Figure Two: Starbucks uses this model to quickly explain its new online order service.
Social Perspective
The convention of a website is to contain information about a certain brand,
service or idea. In this case, Starbucks uses its website to publicize all brandrelated information that it wants the public to have. The audience that it
caters to has to be a broad one, since the company is so wide spread. A few
audience categories are the following: coffee-drinkers (loyal customers and
new clientele), middleclass residents (largely, since the coffee is expensive),
new employees, social media users, and even environmental activists (based
on the companys focus on ethical harvesting). Figure Three shows some of
the target audiences to which the company caters.2
Figure Three: This index is found at the bottom of Starbucks main webpage.
The index in Figure Three does two things. First, it establishes a website
norm/convention, in which general housekeeping information is kept toward
the end of the site. Second, as stated above, the tabs lend themselves to
different audiences. All of these audiences converge, of course, at their
interest in Starbucks. The following diagram illustrates the purpose,
audience, and context of Starbucks website.
Conclusion
Starbucks wisely places the customer at foremost importance. This is
probably the most important take-away. Consumersthat wide spectrum of
audienceswant their needs to be met. Service providers have to place the
fulfillment of this need in the limelight. Use of you language primarily
accomplishes this. Beyond this, Starbucks is also skilled at presenting to a
myriad of audiences. They reach this gamut by using vernacular language
and by ordering information by tabs.
References
1 Professional writing and rhetoric, pg.48-50
2 Starbucks.com [Internet]. 2015; Available from: www.starbucks.com