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you can see that I answered the What question by explaining why gender
not determined biologically. In addition, in the first essay I used word like
standard, expectation, natural and act. These words are too general, I
supposed to use a specific words that I learned in class, such as: norms,
socially constructed and masculine or feminine performances. I correct the
mistakes I did in essay 1 by using these words in my second essay, and here
is a quote that shows that. Therefore, masculine and Feminine
Performances are controlled by the advertisement norms. In other words, the
masculine and feminine performances are socially constructed and
advertisement plays an important role in shaped these performances that
people preform today.
I did not know about the qualifier words, so I did not use it, and thats
was also one of the mistake I did in the first essay. For example, Most
people think that sex and gender are the same thing. This was the first
sentence in my first essay, also on page 2 I repeated the same mistake.
Boys in most societies are expected to like sports and toys such as cars and
wrestlers while girls must play with toys such as fashion dolls and
dollhouse. If you compare these sentences to these sentences which is in
my second essay. The mass media today has access to almost everything,
including people life. And Masculinity and femininity are the two attributes
that we often use to identify a persons gender. You will see that I avoid the
mistake I did by writing Almost and Often in the second essay.
MlA style and format are one the things that I made mistakes in. For
instance, in my first essay I didnt know how to write the quote probably. For