Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
December 2, 2015
Professor Greg McGlure
Writing 39B
5. Has the writer addressed the group situation with some insight and engaging examples?
I think it is great how you clearly stated what your job was in crating this film and what parts you
contributed too to make your film portray the betrayal. In addition to explaining how well you
and your group mates worked, you should talk about things they contributed to the film and why
was that contribution made. Maybe talk about any disagreements you guys had ? ( If any) Other
than that I think you talked about this pretty well.