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reviewing is needed to polish my writing in order to reach the finish line and present an
organized piece of writing. By having others peer review your work or vice versa it
demonstrates I am capable of helping others in improving their writing and is equally
important to peer review others work to help your peer succeed as well by giving them
feedback to strengthen their writing abilities.
Following this document is the submitted editorial with your comments on it.
Although peer review is done, another stage is still needed because one peer reviewer can see
not all flaws and mistakes and an additional reviewing is needed. For example, in the
editorial version you reviewed I did not add citations where they were needed, resulting in a
partial loss of credibility. I also need to work on forming smooth transitions and clarifying
thoughts that were not fully explained and needed further clarification. However, I resolved
the small issues by correctly implementing citations and further clarifying concepts I had not
fully explained prior to this revision.
This is then followed by the final revised editorial. This document reflects the
preparation I have done all semester long, it represents the techniques and tips I have taken
into account to effectively write this piece of writing. This editorial abides by the SLOs of
ethical research, persuasive arguments, and academic language and design. Prior to writing
this editorial I researched peer- reviewed sources and constructed annotations from them to
enable to successfully write this editorial. The paper itself is a persuasive editorial with
arguments, facts, and counterarguments that reflect my preparation for this writing piece.
Not only this, but it abides by the academic language and design SLO because I have chosen
appropriate vocabulary for this editorial along with providing context and depth into a
current issue sea turtles face with poaching. By providing these documents I hope you
recognize that I have strengthened my writing skills through this course during this fall
semester of 2015. These documents reflect all aspects of the SLOs presented in this course
and I can say I have successfully achieved in becoming a proficient write with this course. I
can also say that although I am not the best writer, I am a better writer than I was before.
Sincerely,
Jennifer Munoz