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Ms. Ingram
UWRT 1103
December 2015
Reflection of My UWRT Efforts
When the e-Portfolio assignment was first introduced at the beginning of the
semester it just passed through my mind because I initially had no understanding. It was
something I was unfamiliar with and I did not recognize its purpose or grasp its
importance until I actually began the the process of developing my site. Gratefully, my ePortfolio is finalized and its come a long way. It was not a linear process. It involved a
series of steps, similar to those of the writing concept composing processes. Before
building my website I viewed examples of other students E-portfolios to get a better idea
of the project. I also researched and explored the different website makers, but decided
to go with Weebly since it offered an easy build and design process. To completely
create a website from scratch was challenging, but it soon became enjoyable creating
my site. Although, because I am a perfectionist, my editing and revising efforts were
accompanied with a lot of indecisiveness, along with perpetual determination and time
spent on my site throughout the semester. Satisfyingly, I carefully structured and
designed my e-Portfolio to effectively reflect who I am, and it displays my writing in an
intrinsic, but also in an appealing, way.
For my research essay, in Blog Post #6, I planned the outline and finalized what
my purpose was, along with choosing the appropriate target audience. This basically
provided me with a strong direction for my essay, although I did alter the outline in my
final draft. I considered Blog Post #6 as an artifact, since it was process work and
brainstorming for my research essay, and I noted it at the bottom of the post.
Blog Post #7 was a mass reflection of all of my previous blog posts. I explained
how each assisted me in implementing my best work throughout this class. I concluded
the blog post by saying, I now realize the importance of each blog post and how it has
affected the overall development of my writing. In recollection of my blog posts, the
growth of my writing is evident. I am more confident and show a better recollection of
the information learned.
The purpose of my exploratory essay was to convey a passion of mine. Traveling
is something I love to do. As I said in my essay, I will never get tired of traveling and the
feeling it provokes. I enjoyed writing this essay because it allowed me to reflect on
memories from all of my travels. Expressing this interest of mine allowed me to become
engaged in this course from the beginning. It sparked an initial eagerness to advance
myself in the class.
On the same page as my essay I included two artifacts. The first was a process
work artifact, which is my first draft. A peer advised me to vary sentence length and
flow and to sound more personal, so in the second draft I included a specific
experience from one of my vacations. My second artifact is feedback from my second
draft. In my final draft I further elaborated on that specific experience to make my essay
more personal. I originally did not give that specific moment the justice it deserved, but
by adding more detail and dialogue, I intensified the imagery and it became more
compelling.
My research essay was on a topic that is not only interesting to me, but relative
to who I am. It is about introverts vs extroverts and specifically, how introverts are
misunderstood in society. It was challenging to write about, because I wanted to
accurately inform my audience of this issue (because Im an introvert) and I wanted it to
be interesting. I had some prior knowledge but had to take responsibility for my own
learning. I had to learn more about introverts and extroverts and why they are the way
they are to portray my purpose in a suitable way. I had to take ownership of this
assignment to gain a well rounded understanding of my topic. My research essay was
produced through an elaborative process. My first draft was minimally completed and I
was not satisfied with the outline. The second draft I finalized the layout and had content
under every headline. In my third and final draft I added quotes and in text citations, and
further elaborated in the paragraphs headlined Introverts in the Workplace and
Introverts in School.
The three column notes are located on the same page below my research essay.
This was beneficial because it organized all of my thoughts and sources. In my first draft
I had three sources. In my second draft I had to fix some of the sources to ensure that
they were all in APA format and by then I had eight sources. Finally, there are ten
sources in my final draft. My favorite source was a TED Talk by Susan Cain, who I
quoted throughout my essay.
Lastly, my remaining artifacts on the Additional Assignments are from
assignments in class, such as writing from my writers notebook, along with process
work, and two wild card artifacts. One of my Writers Notebook artifacts is a Dear
Reader which explained to my peers how I edited my second draft. The second Writers
Notebook artifact was a warm up, where we were simply told to draw a fish. This
exercise proved that everyone has a unique interpretation and mind than everyone else,
because no ones drawing was similar. This relates to how the content of certain topics
wont be all the same and author driven. I included the Genre Analysis activity as an
artifact because it also assisted with the idea of genres and how they are specific by the
means of their author and content. My group and I had to examine and analyze a
shampoo bottle to figure to consider the genre. We had to understand the authors
choices to figure out the genre by using the concept knowledge of conventions. To
come to a conclusion, we had to point out the audience, purpose, whether it appealed to
us ethically, pathetically, or logistically, and we had to recognize the modes of
communication.
The Rhetoric Situation visual from the book Who Says? The Writers Research
was helpful with assisting me in understanding the concept of rhetoric. Another artifact
was process work from brainstorming for my research essay, to figure out my target
audience, overall purpose, and working thesis, that I later ended up changing.
Lastly, I included a piece of process work. The assignment was called speed
dating, where we discussed and asked questions about our inquiry topic one on one.
After reading my inquiry question, which is Are introverts misunderstood in society?, I
was able to see my peers initial notion and their judgment first hand. Most of my
classmates were confused and surprisingly, had no previous knowledge about the word
introversion. This gave me motivation to write my research essay so I could further
inform my audience on this topic. I liked this activity because I gained insight on others
thoughts and ideas that supplemented my research and writing process for my essay.