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ENGL 101

M. McCampbell
Fall 2015

ESSAY 4 - PROPOSAL
SCORING RUBRIC

Topic

Does not meet C

Meets C standard

Exceeds C paper

0 7 points

8 - 12 points

13 15 POINTS

Introductio States the problem;


n
vague reference to State the problem, situation or
0 15
solution.
enterprise; support your
points
reasoning with researched
information to show how there
is a problem, a needy situation
or a worth enterprise.

0 4 points
Thesis
0 10
points

Identifies the
solution; flat
statement about
the solution.

0 7 points
Analyze
solution
and how to
implement
it
0 15
points

Flat statement of
how solution will
address problem
Does not include
affected group
Does not describe
the process of
implementation.

5 7 points
Identify the solution, judges it,
and shows its relationship to
the problem, situation or
enterprise .

8 10 points
Cites reasons for the
solution.

8 - 12 points

13 15 POINTS

How it should address the


problem or fix it. At least one
verifiable statistic or examples
or detail and cite it

Provides several
specific examples/
statistics/details how
solution will address
the problem.

Shows how affected group will


benefit(or not)
Describes the process, costs
and materials for
implementation

0 7 points

States the problem;


clear background;
clearly shows who /
what is affected;
comments about
available initiatives;
Specific appeal to the
audience.

8 - 12 points

Gives specific
examples/evidence of
how the affected group
will benefit(or not)
Clearly explains
implementation, cost,
materials and other
relevant detail.
13 15 POINTS

Evaluate
the
solution
0 15
points

Conclusion
05
points

Reports on
outcomes
Not
recommendation
Does not address
the affected group
or the feasibility/
practicality

Clearly stated judgment of


solution
Projects effectiveness and
impact on affected group
Comments on the practicality/
feasibility of the
implementation
Support with researched
evidence.

Comments on the
quality of the solution
and supports with
specific evidence
Comments on the level
of feasibility/
practicality of the
solution
Gives specific details/
examples.

0 2 point

3 4 points

5 points

Flatly summary of
problem, solution,
and whether is it
acceptable or not.
Brings up a new
subject.

Restates the final judgment and Refers to topics brought


connects with the problem and up in the intro;
how well the solution will work. indicates the degree of
challenge the problem
poses and how the
solution can address it.

0 4 points

5 7 points

8 10 points

Material is not cited


correctly or
appropriately at least
three times; does not
follow MLA format.

Most material is
correctly and
appropriately cited; MLA
format is correct

All material is correctly


and appropriately cited;
follows MLA format
without errors

0 2 point

3 4 points

5 points

Work Cited Entries


0 -5 points

MLA format is
haphazardly followed;
entries are not
alphabetized; uses URL
instead of citation.

Three sources are on


Work Cited list; list is
mostly correct; all
entries are alphabetized

All work cited entries


are correct.

Quality of sources
0 -5 points

Sources include
questionable credibility
or are personal sites

Sources are relevant


and credible; some
sources are not clarified
in the essay.

All sources are relevant


and credible and clearly
identified in the essay

0 4 points

5 7 points

8 10 points

Paragraph Structure
0 -10 points

One or two topic


sentences missing;
Paragraphs lack unity

Clearly stated topic


sentences;
Paragraphs clearly
related to thesis

Topic sentences are


specifically worded and
link thesis and all
supporting material

Coherence
0 -10 points

Paragraph not related to


topic;
Organization does not
follow a clear pattern;
Abrupt changes;

Paragraphs arranged in
logical order;
Ideas follow logical
development
Employs transitions
when necessary

Transitions move ideas


clearly throughout
essay;
Ideas build on each
other to emphasize
thesis

In-Text Citations
0 -10 points

Diction
0 -10 points

Wording is vague;
Words are confused
with other meanings
Grammatical
conventions are
infracted;
Uses second pers prn;

Errors (prorated / 500 words)


TOTAL POINTS____________/130

Uses appropriate
pronouns;
Avoids redundant
wording;
Uses words correctly
Avoids slang and worn
out cliches

Writers voice is clear


and authoritative;
Employs specific words;
employs active voice
and specific verbs;
Wording is concise

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