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Dear Sir or Madam,
Paragraph 1 late boarding (ask for refund)
Paragraph 2 N.B. Quiet rude
Paragraph 3 Movie already seen on TV
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Yours faithfully
Wilson Gallo Senz
Linking words:
First, second, firstly, then, and but, on the one hand

Dear Sir or Madam,


I am writing to you to complain about the flight to Florida that I had with your
airline on June 12th. First, we were waiting for about 4 hours to board the plane.
Your staff told us gate 3B but it was 6B and nobody was there to guide us.
Second, the flight attendant was quiet rude with the passengers. I asked for a
blanket because it was too cold and her reply was simply Sorry, but I am very
busy at the moment and I waited for 30 minutes in order to get the blanket.
Finally, the movie that we saw was an old-fashioned one that was on TV two
years ago and it was about a plane crash, we were all terrified.
Due to all these inconveniences and the losses that I had in my business
because of the late arrival to Florida I ask your company for a refund
Yours faithfully
Wilson Gallo Senz

Dear Friend,
It was great to hear from you! I wanna let you know that Im really proud of all
your achievements. Youre a very intelligent student!
Firstly, I dont know why you are asking me this? If I were you I would make my
own decision. Anyway, Ill give you my advice.
Now regarding your question, I think you should save up your money and buy
some new clothes. Remember that vacation time is coming and youre
travelling to Canada. What about buying warm clothes? Remember that by this
time the weather in Canada is extremely cold. My mother sends her love and
says she would love to meet you.
Write back soon and let me know what you decided
Best wishes,
Wilson

Accuracy: gramar Content: answer the question?

Organization: paragraphs linking words punctuation

Decide:
Clothes
Game
4 pargraphs
Greetings
Opinion
Suggestion
Say good bye

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Target reader: frined - director

Content: answer the question?

Decide:
Clothes
Game

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Opinion
Suggestion
Say good bye
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