Name CP Early US History Writing Portfolio: Piece #1 A FIRST REVISION Background: Now that you have written your first draft, itis time to revise it! The revision process will be guided by taking comments on what you wrote in the first draft and integrating it into the organizer below. itroduct eemenes What are you trying to answer? Re-read the Prompt: What was a major economic issue that the carly republic faced, and what were three solutions to that problem? How did debates over this issue and the solutions lead to the rise of the Federalist and Demoeratic-Republican parties? 2) HOOK: Before you answer the prompt you will need some an introductory sentence which invites the reader in (Think about making controversial or surprising statements, giving a quote, asking questions, oF stating some shocking facts) 3) Your THESIS will be your statement of what you will be writing about. Remember that this is an informational piece so you should not be arguing an opinion. You will go into detail about this in your body paragraphs. Answer the questions in the box above in 3-4 sentences THESIS: ‘The major economic issue of the 1790s was the nation’s d lot . Three proposed {Si Wand Debates over how to solve this economic issue with the caused the formation of the Democratic-Republican and Federalist political parties.Paragraph ‘Step 2: Body Paragraphs Debt Paragrap| ify and explain the main financial issue of the early republic 1. Topic Sentence: What was the main financial issue ofthe eatly republic? 2. Explain the issue using specific details. Why did this problem issue happen? WHY was it an issue’ = — 3. Make a connecting statement to the next paragraph using transition words hereto fa QOv © look. at the topic of nexty fiat (sting, to ao) @ crtake a sentence Hur connects topic of HhisH (Aelst) to topic of nextParagraph 3: Identify and explain the three solutions to the financial problem in the United tat {1} Topic Sentence: What were the three solutions to the financial problem in the United States, and who proposed them? . Explain the solutions using specific details. Explain each proposed solution AND how each would help solve the economic issue. . Make a connecting statement to the next paragraph using transition words.Paragraph 4: 1. Topic Sentence: Who were the two main political parties in the United States? Who were the Teading members? 2. Explain each political party using specific details. Explain the major differences in belief between the two parties. 3. Make a connecting statement ro the next paragraph using transition wordsParagraph 5: CAUSE AND EFFECT: How did the issues and proposed solutions above cause the rise of the two distinctly different political parties (Federalists and Democratic Republicans)? _ 1. Topic Sentence: Tur the question above into a statement. |2. Which solution did Jefferson and Hamilton, the leading members of each party, differ 1 greatly in opinion on? . HOW did they disagree on the solution? [Hint: Think about strict vs. loose construction] How did each man’s stance on the solution relate to the beliefs of the political party that each ‘would help form? Jefferson's views on the Constitution would provide the basis of the party, which believed in a, federal government. By contrast, Hamilton’s views on the Constitution would provide the basis of the party, which believed in a federal government.|. Transition to the Conclusion Explain why what you wrote is important to the reader: . Brief Summary of main points ‘Restate your main ideas in 2 new way that keeps the reader interested . Clincher Write a sentence or two that will Keep the reader thinking. What economic clashes exist in American society today? Do major political parties agree today? What are the implications for this? Linnnneeenennee.