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    This document discusses an IELTS essay question about measuring success in business. The essay question asks whether money is a true indicator of business success and what other ways success could be measured. A sample student response is provided which argues that money is an important measure but that there are other factors too, such as the number of clients, employee satisfaction, and taxes paid. The document then analyzes the sample response, noting that the thesis statement could be improved and that one of the body paragraphs does not fully address measuring success. In summary, the document presents a student essay on business success measurement and evaluates its strengths and weaknesses.

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    This document discusses an IELTS essay question about measuring success in business. The essay question asks whether money is a true indicator of business success and what other ways success could be measured. A sample student response is provided which argues that money is an important measure but that there are other factors too, such as the number of clients, employee satisfaction, and taxes paid. The document then analyzes the sample response, noting that the thesis statement could be improved and that one of the body paragraphs does not fully address measuring success. In summary, the document presents a student essay on business success measurement and evaluates its strengths and weaknesses.

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    LIZ IELTS Direct Question Essay - Success of A Business

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    This document discusses an IELTS essay question about measuring success in business. The essay question asks whether money is a true indicator of business success and what other ways success could be measured. A sample student response is provided which argues that money is an important measure but that there are other factors too, such as the number of clients, employee satisfaction, and taxes paid. The document then analyzes the sample response, noting that the thesis statement could be improved and that one of the body paragraphs does not fully address measuring success. In summary, the document presents a student essay on business success measurement and evaluates its strengths and weaknesses.

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    IELTSDirectQuestionEssay:SuccessofaBusiness

    IELTSDirectQuestionEssay:SuccessofaBusiness
    February1,2015byLiz

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    Sampleessayaboutjudgingsuccessinbusiness.Thisessayquestionaskstwodirect
    questionswhichyoumustansweraboutthewaysuccessinbusinesscanbemeasured.The
    essaybelowwaswrittenbyastudentbutasonemajorflawcanyoufindit.
    EssayQuestion

    Somepeoplethinkthattheonlywaytojudgesomeonessuccessinbusinessis
    bytheamountofmoneytheymake.
    Ismoneyatrueindicatorofthesuccessofabusiness?
    Inwhatotherwayscouldsuccessinabusinessbemeasured?

    StudentsEssay
    Itisarguedinthestatementthatachievementandsuccessinbusinesscanonlybejudgedbythe
    amountearnedbythepeople.Frommyprospective,moneyisatrueandmostvaluablecriterionto
    marksuccessofabusiness.Therearedifferentotherwaystomeasurebusinesssuccesswhichwillbe
    takenintoaccountpriortoreachinganinformedconclusion.
    Moneyisconsideredasacorrectandreliableindextopredictthestrengthofasuccessfulbusiness.
    Forexample,familiesofvictoriousbusinessownersarerollinginmoneyjustbecausetheyearnalot
    tofulfiltheneedsanddemandsoftheirdependents.Itisclearlyevidentfromthegivenexamplethat
    theamountofmoneydirectlycorrelateswiththehugeproductivityandoutcomeofatrade.So,itis
    onlypossibleforsomeonetodealwithallthelifeaffairsverycoherentlywithanampleamountof
    earning.
    Therearemanyotherpotentialwaysinwhichthepeakofrunningbusinesscanbemeasuredeasily.
    Firstly,differentdealsandstandardpackagesareonlyofferedbytheleadingmultinationalcompanies.
    Secondly,apowerofoccupationcanalsobejudgedbytheremarkablenumberofclients.Thirdly,an
    organizationcanalsobecomesuccessfulwithhappyclerksandworkingstaff.Finally,asuccessofa
    businesscanberelatedtotheamountoftaxespaidbyitsowners,asincreasedincomewillleadto
    moretaxpayments.
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    Toconclude,althoughmoneyisthemostimportantwaytodeterminetheeffectivenessofabusiness
    butothermethodsarealsoveryimportanttotacklemultipleproblemsinrunningabusiness.By
    followingtheabovementionedprotocols,economywouldhaveabrightfutureinternationally.
    AssessingtheEssayAbove
    1. ShouldthethesisstatementbeginwithFrommyprospective,
    2. Doesthethesisstatementprovideanswerstothequestions?
    3. Doesthefirstbodyparagraphanswerthefirstquestion?
    4. Doesthesecondbodyparagraphanswerthesecondquestion?
    5. Doesthetopicsentence(thefirstsentence)foreachparagraphcontainthemainpoint?
    6. Arelinkingdevicesusedwell?
    7. Whatothercommentscanyoumakeaboutthisessay?
    Answers
    1. ItisbettertostartwithInmyopinion.Seethislessonabouthowtogiveyour
    opinioninanIELTSessay.
    2. Yes,eachquestionshouldbeansweredintheintroduction.
    3. Yes.
    4. Someofthepointsareofftopic.Someideasabouthowacompanycanbecome
    successfulinsteadofhowsuccessismeasured.
    5. ThetopicsentenceforBP1isfineandprovidesaclearanswer.However,thetopic
    sentenceforBP2isnotclearbecauseitdoesntmentionaboutmeasuringsuccessofa
    businessbutaboutmeasuringtherunningofabusiness(whichisnotthesame
    thing).
    6. Yes,theyareusedwell.

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