Paul Schierling

Prof. Padgett
ENGL 102: Rhetoric and Composition
March 24, 2016
How has media sensationalizing increased the rate of violence?

Comment [AP1]: Use proper title case.

On Friday the 13th of November 2015, a series of bombing took place in Paris, France
suburbs, killing, 130 and leaving 100 in critical condition (BBC). Following this tragedy was
weeks of media attention focusing on the lost innocent live, speculating on the cause, and

Comment [AP2]: Life?

overwhelming the public with terror. Only a few months later was a similar attack in Brussels,
Belgium by a similar terrorist organization. As the rate of violent media published through news
networks, movies, and video games increases, the rate of violent atrocities with motives of
inciting terror increases. A positive correlation though does not always mean causation. The
impact of media on behavior is best assessed through the psychological power major new
networks, films, and video games play in society. Commercial news today finds itself falling
into a pattern of sensationalizing acts of terror, in order to grab the eye of the reading, which
leads to increased profit and brand recognition. Movie and video game violence is becoming

Comment [AP3]: First, this phrase the reading is

strange, and second, are you only talking about the text
news? What about television news?

more popular among the masses. With movies and video games becoming more violent, and the
movie rating system is becoming more relaxed in its judgment, children are now being exposed

Comment [AP4]: Okay, so youre talking about all

media.

to violence earlier than before. Following these violent publishing are irrational acts of violence

Comment [AP5]: Again, proof read a little closer.

and radical terrorism. The connection between violent media and terrorizing massacres is that
people are becoming less sensitive to violence leading to more violent thoughts. While news
networks inform and movies and video games entertain, an overexposure can prove detrimental
to an individual psychological development.

For a problem to be analyzed, the problem must first be defined. In the past ten years the

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term terrorism, has taken on a new meaning in the United States in order to help highlight the
battle against radical middle-east, religious group. In June 2015, Ruth DeFoster published a
paper on the United State's interpretation of terrorism titled, Terrorizing the Masses: Identity,
Mass Shootings, and the Media Construction of Terror. Terrorizing the Masses was edited
by Dr. Catherine R. Squires of the University of Minnesota. DeFoster talks about the changing

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perception of terrorism as radical religious groups are becoming more public with their message.
Today the CIA defines terrorism in Title 22 of the U.S. Code, Section 2656f(d)(2) as, Politically
motivated violence perpetrated against noncombatant targets by subnational groups or
clandestine agents (DeFoster 14). To simplify, for an attack to be terrorism, the attacker must be
part of a greater national or ideological group and looking for specific political or social change.
Prior to 2005, and before the major national security changes in response to the attacks on
September 11, 2001, the Department of Defense defined terrorism (per the Code of Federal
Regulations) as, the unlawful use of force and violence against persons or property to intimidate
or coerce a government, the civilian population, or any political or social objectives. (DeFoster
15). Based on historical definitions, terrorism is groups or individuals who are simply looking to
rouse terror in communities. For the sake of appearing less motivated by the September 11
attacks, I will refer to the earlier definition of terrorism. With that being said, this paper will
refer to attacks by both groups and individuals when assessing media's impact on terrorism.
Try turning on the 11 Oclock news and see how long it takes for the anchor to bring up
the most recent terrorist attack or neighborhood shooting. Most often, it wont take long. For
corporate news networks, increasing profits while not jeopardizing the companies name is the
main objective. Though corporate news serves the purpose of informing the public on global and

Comment [AP6]: Okay, i like that youre defining your

terms, but this seems really off topic.

domestic issues, new networks are not charities, and if sensationalizing headlines and presenting
intriguing details can increase profit, then history has shown that the networks will. Although
sensationalizing headlines is profitable, there is a pattern of violent activity spiking afterwards.
A British news network called The Guardian published an article this past summer titled, Media

Comment [AP7]: Thats not really a network

coverage of terrorism leads to further violence. Jaimie Doward, the author of the article, has a
historically liberal tone, but still presents credible studies that back up her claims. In Media

Comment [AP8]: This isnt the time to offer me an

evaluation of the source, lets get into the discussion.

coverage of terrorism, Doward says, sensationalist media coverage on acts of terrorism lead to
much more such acts being committed (Doward). Doward back her claim by citing Michael
Jetter, a professor at the School of Economics and Finance at Universidad EAFIT in Medelln,
Colombia. Jetter mentions how, terrorists need media coverage to spread their message, [to]
create fear and recruit followers (Doward). The article later shows, how terrorism attacks in
the past 15 years have soared from 3,387 to 15,396 (Doward). With a 400% increase in
terrorism in the past 15 years and media coverage on those events increasing by over 300%,
networks news has a clear impact on the behavior of society. While Jaime Dowards theories
and hypotheses introduce new ideas, it is Michael Jetters raw data that gives concrete statistics
that supports Dowards argument. Dowards argument remains only an argument until
additional, esteemed authors support his claims thus turning a simple hypothesis into theory.
Commercial news repeatedly sensationalizes acts of terrorism and figures prove that following
networks reports are similar events.
Jaimie Dowards study shows a positive correlation between the amount violent stories
published corporate and the amount of acts of terrorism. Todays terrorist organization see
network news as a platform to advertise their organization. In plastering massacres in the face of
the public, people begin to feel fear and anxiety, that proven to breeds further violence. Daniel

Comment [AP9]: Okay, so what does this data indicate?

Meierrick and Tim Krieger, both professors at the University of Freiburg, published a peerreviewed article titled What Causes Terrorism?. In Merierrick and Kreigers article, they
discuss the main goals of terrorist organizations when engaging in violent activities. The number
one cause is to, gain publicity and media attention. (Meirrick, Krieger 4). When organized

Comment [AP10]: Getting redundant.

acts of terror take places, it is a journalists duty to report this to the public, but the corporate
networks sensationalizing is what publicizes the attackers and the message they wish to convey.
Examples of media sensationalizing terrorism are when unqualified individuals begin to debate
on the details as well as the publishing of emotion puff-pieces that focus more on pathos than
logos. Journalists do a good job reporting the facts in a professional manner, but it is when the
commercialization of the industry publishes stories with flashy headlines and invite individuals
to debate on theory rather than find solutions based on fact.
The news is an establishment that provides credible information on pressing topics. On

Comment [AP11]: Isnt it their job to report of the

happenings of the world and not on finding solutions to these
problems?

the other hand, movies and video games are sheer fantasy meant to entertain the mind. CBS
provides an article by Michelle Castillo that show the increase of gun violence in movies. CBS
being a historically more liberal network has a pattern of promoting increased gun control.
However, in Castillos study Recent PG-13 Movies Feature More Gun Violence than R-rated
Films, the author provides outside studies by credible institutions that back up the claims being
made. The PG-13 rating was originally made as a buffer, allowing a younger audience the watch
more intense films that were not beyond their maturity. The PG-13 rating became the most
profitable market for film-makers. Castillos study shows that, PG-13 films have a similar rate
of gun violence per hour compared to R-rated films until 2010. Then, gun violence in these films
surpassed their R-rated counterparts between 2011 and 2012 (Castillo). The seriousness of the
increase in gun violence comes in that many teenagers learn their behaviors through films. The

Comment [AP12]: This is a bold claim that youll have

to prove in order to make it.

rating system was one of the few filters limiting the youths exposure to gun violence, but as the
importance of the rating system deteriorates, people become more desensitized to violence and
crime. Now with such sensationalizing being put into movies and video games, the line between
fact and fiction now becomes more blurred. From movies like Batman to video games like Call
of Duty, there is a major influx of violent stimuli and a constant exposure to multimedia violence
has proven to lead to similar events.
In Brad Bushman and Craig Andersons article Understanding Causality in the Effects
of Media Violence, they look at recent shooting linked to violent stimuli such as movies and
video games. The Sandy Hook Massacre consisted of an elementary school shooting ending the
lives of 20 students, 6 faculty member, and Adam Lanza; the shooter himself. After further
investigation, it came to the authorities attention that, Lanza was motivated by violent video
games and a strong desire to top the 77 victims killed by Norwegian mass shooter Anders
Breivik in July 2011 (Bushman, Anderson 4). Video games like Call of Duty condition the
body to become aroused around gun violence, and with humans constantly seeking increased
arousal, events such as Sandy Hook, unfortunately, take place. Much like video games, movies
have provided another source of violent arousal. Most recently was the Aurora, Colorado
shooting, occurring at a The Dark Knight Rises showing, killing 12 and wounding 77. Following
his arrest, Holmes [the shooter] identified himself to the police as the Joker (Bushman,
Anderson 4). For the unaware, the joker is portrayed in The Dark Knight Rises predecessor, The
Dark Knight, as a homicidal psychopath. Similar shooting motivated by movies and video
games have occurred like: Bethel, Alaska; Paducah, Kentucky; Jonesboro, Arkansas; Columbine,
Colorado; Red Lake, Minnesota; Beltway sniper attacks, Washington DC. With such a vast array
of violent media leading to terror-inducing massacres, there is a clear pattern between the

exposure to violence and similar acts. Movies and video games today contain such realism, that
people are having trouble distinguishing between what is a true model of behavior and what is
not.
Investigation of movie theater and school shootings have shown that the perpetrators
have engaged in violent multimedia, but this does not prove that there is any relation between the
two. Stuart Marshall Bender published a peer-reviewed article in 2014 in Projections, a
psychology journal. In the article Bender talks about how the film industry produces pieces that
are increasingly more realistic. Bender then shows that the exposure to such realism causes
people to mimic the behavior in front of them. Connecting to Castillos study that shows people
are being more exposed to violence, it is safe to infer that an influx of violent movies is causing
an increase in terrorizing acts of violence. Many filmmakers argue that realistic movies, enable
humans to mentally rehearse for potential future (Bender 8). With that being said, the highest
grossing movies of 2015 were Star Wars: Episode VII, Jurassic World, and The Avengers;
making over $2 Billion combined (Fandango). While filmmakers agree that movies influence
decision making space battles, dinosaurs, and superheroes are violent fantasies that have no
relevance in the decision making of this generation. Bender then compares the influence movies
have on behavior and the violent material available. When filmmakers put sensationalized
violence in realistic settings, The everyday viewers then, have expectations that may not match
up to the reality of the events depicted (Bender 9). The art of film is creating a captivating
setting, so directors go for realism, but then lace violent content which distorts the audiences
perception of reality. Movies and video games leading to violence is an understandable relation;
movie and video games today are becoming more realistic, thus having the audience associate it
with reality. Next, a flexible rating system is putting younger audiences in front of increasingly

more gun violence. Finally, the audience begins to feel the setting on screen is the setting in
reality and feel violence is in society, just as much as movies and video games show.
Problems remain problems until a legal and legitimate solution is proposed. The most
obvious solution is to censor news networks, filmmakers, and video game creator, but fortunately
such extreme measures are a clear infringement on ones freedom of speech. The opposite of
preventing the publishing of violent material is the promotion of nonviolent material. Corporate
news, Hollywood blockbusters, and video games are all driven by profitability, so the
government would have to subsidize certain businesses to limit violent material being
publishing. With naked and hungry people around the world, the government shouldnt be
funneling money into big businesses, so subsidizing joins censorship as an inappropriate
solution. Unfortunately, there is no appropriate solution to limiting violent publishings, but there
are barriers that can be created to limit ones exposure to these materials. In 2009, the American
Academy of Pediatrics (AAP) published a policy statement titled Media Violence, which listed
ways to minimize a peoples exposure to violent material. Being pediatricians the AAP Believed
that child development is the crucial point at which violent material enhances violent behavior.
The AAP published a list of parenting methods that are neither unethical nor and infringement
upon ones rights. The main solutions to minimizing the impact of violent materials are listed
below:

Remove televisions, internet connections, and video games from childrens bedrooms

Make thoughtful media choices and co-view them with children.

Limit screen time to 1 to 2 hours per day

Avoid screen media for infants or toddlers younger than 2 years

Comment [AP13]: While i do think these solutions are

over-simplifying the issue, these solutions dont speak to
some of your discussion before about the news media being
at fault of terrorist acts.

Media violence is apparent in corporate news, movies, and video games; all industries too big to
censors or subsidize, so the solution lies in the hands of the consumer. By parents acting as moral
censors, children will no longer be an audience of the sensationalizing of violence and mature
faster, thus becoming capable of comprehending acts of terrorism without it is resorting to
violent behavior.
Violence and terrorism will always be present, people will always see movies listen to
music, and watch the news, but when violence is sensationalized to such a glorified state,
violence will more than exist, it will consume humanity. News networks serve the purpose to
inform that public of important information, but commercial interest has caused credibility to
take a back to profitability, in making headlines more and more sensational. Movies and video
games are tools to escape the stresses of our realities, but those industries now promote gun
violence through constant implementation, thus creating a generation heavily absorbed in
violence. Music is more art than anything else, but when art reaches such a large audience,
which such dry messages today, advocating for gun violence will create a society of gun
violence. Peace and violence cannot coexist, for one to rise, one must fall, and the pattern of
publishing and human behavior that follows shows an environment of violence.
Paul,
Youve done some fine research here and youve done a good job engaging the
discussion at hand. This does feel a bit cluttered and unfocused. Im not super sure what youre
specific thesis is here. You provide solutions at the bottom, but they sound like commonsense
things that a lot of parents probably already do. You havent convinced me that the media has
caused us to be more violent. Pretty sure we were more violent when we used to kill people for
being natives, or when we used to have public disembowelings, right? Comparatively, we are a

good bit less savage, weve just learned to package and sell violence (much of which is pretend).
My point is, that some of these claims are unsubstantiated and you havent drawn a persuasive
connection between media violence and other violence. Also, this needs some proof reading. If
you revise this, cut about 600 words out, and make this sound like a research paper and not the
snippets of an annotated bibliography.

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