Diego Palacios 03/28/16 ENGLATES Marked draft 2/Proect Assesment Project Assessment ‘This project assessment was made egardsto the changes and adaions rade tothe Chapter llA paper. Allthe changes done were performed with many considerations such as audience of the paper, tne ofthe paper, the suestions ftom the author and personal experienc in technical writing In contrast tothe st partathe paper this chapter contained much ss erors and grammatical mistakes nd mainly had consistency issues as far asthe font sae and coor, as wellas| alignment ofthe many lists and pleures. ‘The paper contained a ew sues with he ont and how it was used ‘trouphout the 20 pages ofthe chapter ough drat The ear ofthe font was rey forthe fist few pages then turned black There were alo quotes added to the paper ‘hat were font sie 10, a5 opposed tothe rest f the paper which was font size 11.1 ‘made the changes to have all the font be size 1 and color blckin order to create consistency nthe paper, at appeared as ifmultipe people had worked on tis ‘ough draft. Another consistency Issue waste star ofthe paragraphs. Some of ‘hem appeared tobe indented atthe fist sentence then others dd not include this, aswell cod spacing between the chapter andthe respective ils. opted to Indentall ofthe paragraphs and leave no space between the paragraphs unless 1.5 wavold making the pape ook too cuted ast was already lng enough, This althelpd to make the reading pacing much more welerable when the audlence attempts to read it in one go. Atthe top ofthe pape, there was a small is of es "isso which appeared inthe paper highlighted in blue and yellow. Without any ‘formation regaining the reasoning behind this decided highligh he ist corresponding to how it appeared inthe paper. Many ofthe bulleted lis found in paper had tobe propery ligne as they seemed to ifr sighlin their Indentation. They had tobe done manally a there wer ther sections in between ‘but bllove it helped to gulde the reader visually ‘ere was title between, Along with hie change, made he spacing Between ines oe 2Diego Palacios oy/2s/n6 ENcLengs Letter of transmital Diego Palacios Editing with Digital Technologies Student unce Charlotte, C2223 March 28, 2016 ‘Chistina Sancher CChistine Robinson uncc Charlotte, Nc24223 ‘Dear Mr. Duron: 1am submitting the edits done for the rough drat ofthe rest of Chapter lA part. Alledits were done on "Microsoft Word 13 and commented to show what was changed and other suggestions. This new part of ‘the chapter felt better thought-out and require significant less changes and fies to be done. Ther "were some highlights being used in some ofthe titles which was not explained, s01 woud lke to know more about what that signified ‘once again, like to thank you for this opportunity and hope to hear from you soon. lam avalable at any time if you need would lke to go over any other chapters that required attention Sincerely, ~ Diego PalaciosDiego Palacios 03/28/16 ENGLAIES Marked draft 2/Proect Assesment | Bona of expansion: The T-shaped vc A Peon Coune negro earn ra tah) Gormurcicon Abou fe Curse kya) 8 —— hs ce Tat) Tiana mpemeriaion fC Chaos Prospect fr Success PFS) Quay) — fora? eee eer renters tom varus acres who tach catesin wi BOM th tea year sents re ra Combi wi ie reguied ger vn errs, eneng yen stents Seoerneateeec | rie inan sce une to acsessbeslennngoaonss sacemisuceesnguy, PF neatinpoerttonin a angen be banana He ogamy, set tome wey mtr om rw oh boted one T-shaped naval ‘The shaped oar, 86) corn efor ate malar ning ‘We eam eons ss itn e pares ae eae fe Tan one ity ey sh soot 2 pera frost inane) The concn ammonia ‘eaten an buts ervranments ear oes of enpcyesanaleamers a busines. 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