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1. Introduction(Paragraph 1)
A. Potato is common crops which most of people love. Potato cuisines such as potato
salads, scalloped potato make perfect harmony with other ingredients.
B. However, this potato caused a catastrophe which shows us living hell from Ireland in
mid 1850s. This called Irish Great Famine or An Drochshaol. At that time, about 2 millions
of Irish were died from the blight of potato.
C. Why this terrible disaster happened so seriously? The simple fact which states that
cause of famine occurred by the potato blight must not be enough. The reason is analyzed
by three aspects; dependence of potato, population increase, socioeconomic structure of
Island, Initial countermeasure of the British government.
2. Body
A. Paragraph 2 (fist cause of effect) topic sentence: Dependence on potato
Food production of Ireland totally depended on potato.
a. Ireland did not have various agriculture implements (Zukerman, p.46). So, most
of Irish farmers who did not have agriculture implements could cultivate potato.
b. The yield of potato was efficient per one acre land. Irish farmland was divided for
tiny area per one farmer family. Additionally, Irish farmers only have 14% arable lands of
whole farmlands in Ireland. Therefore, they need to use potato for overcoming the poor
circumstance.
c. Potato was highly nutritious compared with other foods. Probably, many people
did not need to find substitute crops. They were just satisfied with potato which was
described as the great plant.
A. Paragraph 3 (second cause of effect) topic sentence: Socioeconomic
structure
Socioeconomic structure of Island was unstable and unfair.
a. Tenant farmers were extremely exploited by the ruling classes. They were hard to
3. Conclusion ( paragraph 5)
A. Restated thesis: Irish Great Famine was the terrible event in Europe history for
many years. According to this, there were many submerged factors which brought
out tragedy. It was not only natural disaster but also artificial catastrophe. Unstable
Irish system murdered many people of Ireland. In addition, crucial British
government collapsed Irishmans life.
B. For that reason, we must previously exert to make an egalitarian society and find
the fundamental cause quickly to prevent enormous calamity.
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K. H. Connell, The Population of Ireland, 1750-1845 (Oxford, 1950).
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http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/british/victorians/famine_01.shtml (Jim Donnelly, 2011.02.17)
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