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Name
Date
Unit/Crit
eria
Teacher

Shray Khanna
14th April 2016
Unit 365 1.1 (task 2)
Miss Bowater

Task 2
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A plan
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Have they identified what the audition will look and
feel like?
Have they identified how will they engage with the
audition in relation to their personal goals?
Evidence of where potential issues may lie and how
they might be overcome.
An understanding of relevant health and Safety
implication associated with auditioning in this
context.
Focussed and achievable plan.
Clear understanding of what the audition will look
and feel like and the relation to their personal goals.
Evidence of a clear understanding where potential
issues may lie and how they might be overcome
effectively.
A clear understanding of relevant health and Safety
implication associated with auditioning in this
context, with some understanding of where
issues may occur and how they may be
avoided.
Inspiring, focussed and achievable plan
Strong evidence of a clear understanding where
potential issues may lie with clear strategies of
how they might be overcome effectively.
A clear understanding of relevant health and Safety
implication associated with auditioning in this
context, with a clear understanding of where
issues may occur and how they may be avoided.

Pass

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Merit

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1/2
Distinction

Strengths
Shray this is an inspiring, focussed and achievable plan of how you are going to
succeed in your upcoming audition. You clearly know what the audition will look

and feel like and how this audition can help you meet your personal goals
previously set. You have a clear understanding of where potential issues may lie
and have talked through very clear strategies as to how you are going to
overcome these issues if they occur or how you will prevent them from
happening. You need to provide a little more specific information about your
rehearsal process explaining how you are going to rehearse to secure the
distinction on this criterion. Your understanding of health and safety is relevant
to your specific needs as a singer and guitarist and clear strategies are put in
place to prevent any issues occurring or avoided.
Improvements
- When you are talking about your rehearsal/practice sessions can
you mention specifically how you rehearse? What are you going to
do in your rehearsal to prevent potential issues happening?
Current
Grade

Fail

Student Comments

Pass

Merit

Distinction