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    The position of women in society has improved, but there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Many women find it very difficult to return to work after having children. Traditional views of a woman's position have deteriorated rather than improved. Women carry the burdens of equality but get none of the benefits of equality.

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    The position of women in society has improved, but there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Many women find it very difficult to return to work after having children. Traditional views of a woman's position have deteriorated rather than improved. Women carry the burdens of equality but get none of the benefits of equality.

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    The position of women in society has improved, but there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Many women find it very difficult to return to work after having children. Traditional views of a woman's position have deteriorated rather than improved. Women carry the burdens of equality but get none of the benefits of equality.

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    1Readthemodelbelowandcompletetheparagraphplan
    below,identifyingthetopicofeachparagraph.Hasthe
    opposingviewpointbeenincluded,andifso,inwhich
    paragraph?Then,replacethelinkingwordsorphrasesin
    boldtypewithothersynonymousones.
    "Althoughthepositionofwomeninsocietytodayhasimproved,
    thereisstillagreatdealofsexualdiscrimination."Doyou
    agree?
    Throughoutthiscentury,theroleofwomenwithinsocietyhas
    changed,andthemajorityofpeoplefeelthatthechangeisfor
    thebetter.Morewomenworkthaneverbefore,anditis
    acceptedinWesternculturethatmanywomennowhave
    careers.Nonetheless,inmyopinionthereisstillagreatdealof
    sexualdiscriminationagainstwomenwithinsociety,andthe
    beliefthatsexualequalityhasbeenachievedisnotaltogether
    accurate.
    Tobeginwith,manywomenfinditverydifficulttoreturnto
    workafterhavingchildren.Themainreasonforthisisthatthere
    arerarelyanyprovisionsmadeforchildcareintheworkplace
    and,inthesecases,womenareforcedtofindsomeonetolook
    afterthechildrenwhiletheyareatwork.Obviously,thiscan
    provetobeatimeconsumingandexpensiveprocess,yetit
    mustbedoneifmothersaretobeabletoresumetheircareers.
    Secondly,thetraditionalviewsofthepositionofwomenwithin
    societyaresodeeplyingrainedthattheyhavenotreally
    changed.Forinstance,notonlyistheviewthatwomenshould
    stayathomeandlookaftertheirfamilystillwidelyheld,butit
    isreinforcedthroughimagesseenontelevisionprogrammesand
    advertisements.Anexampleofthisisthatfewmenareever
    seendoinghouseworkontelevision,sincethisistraditionally
    thoughtofas"awoman'sjob".
    Thirdly,sincefamiliesoftenneedtwoincomesinordertoenjoy
    agoodstandardofliving,awomanfindsherselfdoingtwojobs:
    oneathomeandoneattheoffice.So,itcouldbesaidthata
    woman'spositionhas,infact,deterioratedratherthanimproved,
    withtheresultthatwomencarrytheburdensofequalitybutget
    noneofthebenefits.

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    Incontrast,therearesomepeoplewhoclaimthattheproblem
    ofsexualdiscriminationnolongerexists.Theypointoutthat
    womendo,afterall,havelegalrightsintendedtoprotectthem
    fromdiscrimination.Inaddition,afewwomenarenow
    beginningtoreachtoppositionsasjudges,businessleadersand
    politicians,whileanumberofotherpreviouslyallmale
    professionsareopeningtheirrankstowomen.Nonetheless,
    theseexamplesarenotthenormanddiscriminationisstillvery
    muchwithus.
    Takingthesepointsintoconsideration,Iwouldsaythatthe
    positionofwomenhasimprovedonlyslightly.Whilerulesand
    lawshavechanged,itisthedeeprootedopinionsofpeople
    withinsocietywhicharetakingalongertimetoevolve.
    Needlesstosay,attitudeshavechanged,sexualdiscrimination
    willremainaproblemwhichweallneedtofaceandfight
    against.
    Introduction
    summaryofthetopic
    clearstatementofopinion
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