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Description
What attributes does it
have?
(size, shape, features)
Place/Time
Where is it? Habitat?
When is it?
Dynamics/Behaviour
What does it do?
Summarising comment
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2. E- MAILS
Dear Sara,
This is the first time I've ever written a letter. My teacher told me we can
make friends by writing letters. I live in New Brunswick an you live in
Saskatchevan. What is it like? I live near St John River. We have a Burmese
cat. I put his picture in my letter. His name is Elliot and he likes to play. Do
you have pets too? I want to get your letter very quickly.
Your friend,
Julia
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3. NARRATIVE
Purpose: Narratives entertain, engage, amuse, interest and intrigue readers by
telling real or imagined experiences. They might also explain, inform or instruct.
Text Is Thomas in trouble? Language
organisation Thomas was bored. His mother was planting tomatoes features
in the back garden, and Daisy, the dog, was snoring Uses past
Introduction loudly underneath the kitchen table. He had no one to tense e.g.
(orientation) play with and nothing to do. Suddenly he felt very opened,
- characters hungry. He opened the pantry and looked inside. He spotted,
(who? what?) spotted a box of chocolates on the top shelf. ‘Problem thought
- setting number one,’ he thought, “is how to get at it?”
(where?) After dragging the stool across the kitchen floor, Uses
- time (when?) climbing up, reaching high with arms outstretched, he conjunctions
e.g. after, as
still couldn’t grab it. He ran to get the broom. He
Uses
climbed up on to the stool, held the broom high and descriptive
balanced carefully as he poked it towards the top shelf. language e.g.
He watched in horror as the broom knocked other watched in
Series of things off leaving the chocolates sitting alone on the horror,
events which shelf. Glancing down, he saw the tomato sauce sliding chocolates
lead to a out of its bottle and spraying on to the floor. The lid sitting alone
problem flew off a canister of raisins and a packet of biscuits
(complication). split open. When they hit the floor it looked like the Writes in the
The problem flies were feasting on a forgotten barbecue. As he third person
relates to the picked up the containers, he wondered how he was e.g. He, she
characters or Can be
going to clean up the mess.
events written in
At that moment Daisy sprang into action. She the first
crunched up the biscuits, slurped up the sauce and person
Solution swallowed the raisins. In just a few seconds the floor e.g. I, we)
(resolution) was spotless.
The resolution Thomas turned to see his mother watching her hands Uses
explains how at the kitchen sink. ‘Would you like hamburgers for dialogue e.g.
the problem is lunch?’ she asked. think I’ve lost
solved. (Why?) ‘I think I’ve lost my appetite.’ said Thomas slowly. my appetite
Traditional narratives include tales, fables, myths and legends while modern narratives includes
fantasy, realistic fiction, adventure, mystery and horror stories. Narratives are used in picture books,
simple short stories and longer stories with complicated plots. Some narrative features might also
be found in spoken stories, cartoons, comics and feature films.
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4. INFORMATIVE TEXTS: EXPLANATIONS or REPORTS
4.1. EXPLANATION
Purpose: An explanation tells how and why something works or happens in the world.
Text What causes a rainbow? Language
organisation A rainbow is a coloured arc of light that is often seen features
in the sky when the sun is shining after a shower of
Begins with a rain. Uses a
general A rainbow contains all of the colours of the spectrum. title that
statement to The top of the arch is always red, followed by orange, introduces
introduce the with yellow, green, indigo, blue and violet in that the topic
phenomenon order. Uses present
tense e.g.
Has a series of is, contains,
sequenced appears
paragraphs
It is important to explain the reasons why things happen as well as what things happen in some of
these text types. Explanation might link with science and technology topics to consider mechanical,
technological or natural happenings such as why a kettle boils, how a television works or why
volcanoes erupt.
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4.2. REPORT
Purpose: Reports present factual information in a concise and logical sequence.
Reports avoid personal comments and opinions from the author.
Text The Tasmanian devil Language
organisation The Tasmanian devil is a marsupial. (A marsupial is an features
A general Uses present
animal that feeds and carries its young in a pouch.) It lives
statement or tense e.g.
only in Tasmania and was called a devil by the early
classification is, has
European settlers because of its fierce appearance and loud
explains the
screeching. Uses
subject of the
specialised
report
vocabulary e.g.
marsupial,
Each paragraph
nocturnal
has different
information Writes in the
third person
e.g. it, they
Each paragraph
Uses precise
has a topic
and
sentence and The devil is the same size as a small dog. It has a large
economical
supporting head, a stocky body and a short, thick tail. While the fur is
language
details mostly black, there are often white markings on the back
gives
and chest.
accurate
Because the devil is a nocturnal animal, (it is active at
information
Visual texts e.g. night) it spends the days in the dense bush and hunts for
in short
maps, diagrams food after dark.
sentences) e.g.
and charts are While it can catch prey the size of a small wallaby the devil
Devils breed
often included often feeds on the bodies of dead sheep and cows from
in March,
Includes a farms. Its very powerful jaws and teeth enable it to eat
devils have
concluding bones and fur as well as the meat. Farmers are pleased that
been affected
statement or devils stop the spread of disease by removing the rotting
by cancer
summary bodies of dead animals. Groups of devils eat together from
the same carcass (body of a dead animal) and they are such Might include
noisy eaters that they can be heard for several kilometres. a glossary.
Includes a
Devils breed in March and the young are born in April. bibliography
While more are born, only two or three babies survive to live in
their mother’s pouch for four months. They move with their
mother into a hole or a hollow log until they are ready to live on
their own in the bush at the end of December.
Bibliography:
http://www.dpiwe.tas.gov.au/inter.nsf/WebPages/BHAN-5372WP?open
http://en.wikipedia.og/wiki/Tasmanian_Devil
Information reports ask students to question, define, describe, analyse and
evaluate information.
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