Body paragraph 3

Topic: Virus/Pathogen breaking through cities

Detail 1: Explain the pathogen itself and then state its factors/symptoms, etc.

Detail 2: Give example of former classmate infected with the disease. He should feature all symptoms
and explain. Lead this detail into my main theme of the overall essay.

Body Paragraph 2

Topic: Parents leaving children

Detail 1: Explain that many families are leaving, add my own personal example to fill up text and the
area of their migration.

Detail: Explain how children are feeble without parents and how we will die because we have not been
nurtured enough to comprehend the outside world. Also explain my sadness of their departure.