Essay Map: Depression Among Students in Malaysia.

Introductory Paragraph Include what is depression and basic

information about depression

Question to be answered: What is depression?

What are the symptoms of depression?
Why depressions occur on students?

Thesis Statement: This paper will discuss the symptoms,

causes and treatment of depression
among students in Malaysia.

Background Paragraph

Topic Sentence: Depression among students can be

detected through symptoms.

Question to be answered in paragraph: What are the symptoms?

What happen to the students?
Why depression can make the students
like that?

Support sentence: Research that have been done to the

students.

Body Paragraph 1

Topic Sentence: The causes of depressions are related to

the unstable emotions of the students.

Question to be answered in the What are the causes?

paragraph: Why depressions occur in student’s life?
What make students in depression?
Who are the person that involve when
the students in depression?

The students fail to control their emotion.

Support sentence:
Body Paragraph 2

Topic sentence: Depression can make the students think

irrationally.

Questions to be answered: What are the effects when the students

in depression?
What will they do during the depression?

Support sentence: It is important to take care of the

student’s emotion.

Body Paragraph 3

Topic Sentence: One way to treat depression is that

people in the surrounding must help the
students to face the depression.

Question to be answered in the What can people do to help the

paragraph: students?
Who is the most important person to play
an important role to help the students?

Support sentence: Many ways that we can do to help the

students. For example, make a
counseling session.

Concluding paragraph There are many symptoms of depression

can affect the students also can be cause
that student thinks irrationally. But, by
doing the treatment we can help them to
face the depression.

Remind the readers the consequences

when we in depression and how
important to overcome it.

Final comments, its important for us

to learn about depression and know
the ways of the treatment.