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Analytical Exposition

Outline : 1. Thesis : I personally think that blackberry is make a problem in the world. Why blackberry is dangerous ? 2. Argument : - It make someone lazy. - It make someone busy with his or her blackberry. - It is not good enough for your healthy. 3. Reiteration : I personally think that blackberry is make a problem in the world. Why blackberry is dangerous ? First, it make someone lazy. usually people will prefer holding the blackberry than books.
if all people are lazy, the world would be filled by people who are lazy. Second, it make someone busy with his or her blackberry. It makes the students do not have time to learn. Because half of her or his time used to holding a blackberry. Third, It is not good enough for your healthy. Because they could use it for a long time. It makes a person feel addicted to using it again. if not restricted, the people will be exposed to mental disorders.

From the facts above, it is obvious that blackberry is dangerous to used by people.

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