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COMMISSION ON HUMAN RIGHTS Sub-Commission on Prevention of Discrimination and Protection of Minoritie s Thirty=-eighth sessio n Item 4 of the provisional agend a

REVIEW OIL . FURTHER DEVELOPMENTS IN FIELDS WIT H WHICH THE SUB-COMMISSION HAS BEEN CONCERNE D Revisedandupdated report on the-question of the ' prevention and punishment of the crime of genocide ' . . prepared-by-Mr .-B . Whitaker Corrigendu m 1. Page iii : Foreword should be placed on a separate page . 2. Paragraph 1, last line : Paragraph Replace the word "Benjamin" by "Ben" . Delete "and three progress reports" .

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Insert "Bahamas" between "Argentina" and "Barbados" . Insert "Bulgaria" between "Belize" and "the Byel"orussian" . Insert " France " between "El Salvador " and " the German " Insert "Panama" between "the Netherlands" and "th e

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Between "Gypsies" and "This was " , insert the fol.lowing : Paragraph 22, line 9 : !'as well as many millions cif Ukrainians, Slovenes, Poles and others . " Footnote 12, last line : Replace "Fraenk" by "Fraenkl" . , Footnote 13, first line : Replace "1 million" by
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Footnote 13, first line : Replace "possibly" by "perhaps" . Footnote 13, line 3 : Replace the word " This " by the following "(J . MacCarth y estimates 600,000 out of 1,500,000 ; Lepsius 1 million out of 1 . 8 a 2 :million) . The intent" .

17a . Footnote 13, line 16 : Underline "Deutschland and Armenian" . 18. Footnote 13, last line : After "1982) ;"*add . the following : "J . MacCarthy , Muslims and Minorities (New . York University Press, 1933) ; M . Vandemeulebroucke : Report for the European Parliament's Political Affairs Committee (1985) ; The Genocide of the Armenians in World War. 1 and The Criminal V . Dadriar-i' Prosecution-of Authors of .Genocide by Recourse to Domestic Penal Codes (not yet published) . " Footnote 15, first line : Replace the. . . first word "The" by "Some of the" . Footnote 15, first line : Delete the word "Government" . Footnote 15, last line : At-the end of the footnote ; adds the following sentence : "This happened in a context of violence, and considerable efforts a t reconciliation have si rice been made ." .

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22. - Paragraph 22, line 29 : Between "suggested . ! '' and "It could seei.il!! 4 insert th e following : "Certainly the suffering of the Palestinians, and the successiv e massacres they have endured, should never ` beforgotten :" : 23. Footnote 16 : At the end of t ;he footnote, add the following sentence : "This i s denied by the Government of Paraguay ." . Insert " It may be noted that" between " minorities ." an d

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Paragraph 35, first line : Replace "considerable" by "prolonged" . parag-raph''5-6three last lines : Delete the following : amon those which hav e not yet ratified are Burundi, Equatorial Guinea, Paraguay, South -Africa, Ugand a and the United States of America" .

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Paragraph 73, line 10 : Between "acquitted" and "When", insert the following : "The Turks also in 1919. 20 held trials : not of 'war criminals' but of som e of the Ottomans guilty of the Armenian genocide" . Footnote

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Paragraph 77, line 15 : Between "parallels" and "It is important", insert th e following sentence : "It is noteworthy and encouraging that the resolutio n appointing the new Special Rapporteur on Torture was adopted by the Commissio n on Human Rights without a single negative vote ." .

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