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TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
READtheinstructionsandfollowthemwitlessly.Payparticularattentiontofont sizes,margins,andlengthlimits. Addresseverypointmentioned,intheorderthattheyrepresentedinthe instructions.Makeiteasyforareadertoseethatyouhaveincludedeverything thatwasaskedfor.(Usethesamestructureandthesamewordsasgiveninthe instructions.) Adheretopageandwordlimits,ifstated.Ifapagelimitisnotstated,restrictyour SOPtonomorethantwosinglespacedpagesinareadable(11pt.min.)font. Bewareofthepitfallsofwordprocessing.Itsreallyeasytocopywhatyouve writtenforCornellintoanewdocumentforOhioStateandforgetthestrayIreally wanttocometoCornellUniversityinthefourthparagraph.ButtheBuckeyeswill notbeamused.
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Firstorderquestions: WhathaveIlearnedinthelastfouryears?aboutphysics?aboutmyself? WhatdoIenjoydoing?WhatdoIdowell? WhatdoIknowaboutresearchandwhyisthatagoodcareerchoiceforme? Whataremycareerexpectations?mydreams? Secondorderquestions: HowcanIshowthatIfinishwhatIstart? HowcanIshowthatImcreative? HowcanIshowthatIcanovercomeadversity? HowcanIshowthatIhaveanaptitudeforphysics(ormaterialsscience,or electricalengineering,orcomputerscience)?forresearch? HowcanIshowthatIhavewhatittakestobesuccessful?
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Overthecourseofyourgraduatestudies,thedepartmentthatacceptsyouwill likelyspend>$200konyour PhD.Maketheadmissionscommitteeconfident thatyouwillbesuccessfulinyourresearchandyourteaching. Addressthefollowingpoints: 1. Youunderstandthatgraduateschoolisaboutsuccessfullydoingindependent researchnotaboutgettinggoodgradesinclasses. 2. Youhavethedisciplineandmaturitytomanageyourtimeandmeetyour responsibilitiesasanemployee. 3. Youhavetheskillsandintereststobeagoodteacheraswellasaresearcher.
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
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Examplesofshorttermgoals(whatyouwanttodointhenexttwoyears): Exploreoneortwosubfieldsofphysics. Learnnewtheoreticalapproachesorexperimentaltechniques. Polishyourcommunicationsandteachingskills. Contributetoaresearchgroup. Examplesoflongtermgoals(whereyouwanttobein10years): Pursueacareerinresearchinindustryoranationallaboratory. Becomeaprofessor. Becomeanentrepreneurinahightechenterprise. Becomeanquantitativeanalystinthefinancialindustry. Contributetothenationsenergyindependence. Designnewbiocompatiblematerialsforprosthetics.
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Beselective.AnSOPisaprospectus,notyourmemoirs. Theexperiencesthatyouhighlightshouldberelevanttoboth yourpersonalcareergoals. theopportunitiesthatthisparticulardepartmentoffers. Toolittleisasbadastoomuch;youwantthecommitteememberstofeelthatthey knowenoughaboutyoutopredictyoursuccessconfidently. ThemotivatingwhyIwanttobeaphysicistshouldbenolongerthanaparagraph. Theadmissionscommitteeprobablydoesntreallycareaboutyourtriptothe MuseumofScienceandIndustryinfirstgradeoryourCubScoutmeritbadgein electricity. Includeexperiencesthathavedirectlyshapedyourthinkingorthathavetested yourresolve,butbeselective.Onecompellingexampleismuchmorepersuasive thanadisjointedlaundrylistofthingsyouvedone. Donttalktoomuchaboutclasses.Graduateschoolisaboutdoingindependent research,nottakingclasses.Ifyoudo talkaboutclasses,emphasizeskillsthat youveacquired,notgradesthatyougotorcoursesyousatthrough.
Copyright2012 TheBoardofTrusteesoftheUniversityofIllinois
TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
7Sept2012
Arethereanydeficienciesinyouracademicrecordortestscoresthatyoushould explain? Talktoyouradviserandyourletterwritersaboutwhetheranexplanationwillhelp orhurtyourchances.Ifthedeficiencyissoegregiousthatitcastsdoubtonyour abilitytobesuccessfulingraduatestudy,somebody hastodiscussit.Aletter writermaybeabletoofferamoreconvincingexplanationthanyoucan;heorshe atleasthasthecloakofobjectivity. Ifyoufeelcompelledtoexplaintheproblem,focusonwhattheexperiencehas taughtyou,whatyouvedonetoovercometheproblem,andhowyouarebetter equippedtofaceadversityinthefuturebecauseofit. Ownyourmistakes,andtakeresponsibilityforyouractions. Amancanfailmanytimes,butheisntafailureuntilhebeginstoblame somebodyelse.JohnBurroughs,18371921,U.S.naturalistandessayist, influentialintheconservationmovementintheUnitedStates
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TheStatementofPurpose, CeliaM.Elliott
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Trainyourselftorunthespellcheckeverytimeyoumakeachangetoyour document.Ifsomethinghastobeperfect (andanSOPdoes),usetheseold proofreaderstricks: 1. Alwaysproofreadfromahardcopy.Mistakeswillleapoffthepaperthatyoull neverseeonthescreen. 2. Startatthelowerrighthandcornerofthedocumentandreadrighttoleft, bottomtotop. Suggestionsforfurtherreading: C.R.Barrera,TheGraduateSchoolApplication, http://sciencecareers.sciencemag.org/career_magazine/previous_issues/articles/2 006_04_14/noDOI.5474268556298302823 B.Rybarczyk,SellYourself:GuidanceforDevelopingYourPersonalStatementfor GraduateSchoolApplications, http://sciencecareers.sciencemag.org/career_magazine/previous_issues/articles/2 006_01_06/noDOI.15679808495969386309 B.Rybarczyk,Perspective:SellYourselfRefiningthePersonalStatement, http://sciencecareers.sciencemag.org/career_magazine/previous_issues/articles/2 010_01_08/caredit.a1000005
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