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Organization o Inadequate (10 points): There appears to be no organization of the essays contents. o Needs Improvement (15 points): Organization of the essay is difficult to follow, due to inadequate transitions and/or rambling format. o Adequate (20 points): The essay can be easily followed. A combination of the following is apparent: Basic transitions are used; a structured format is used. o Professional quality (25 points): The essay can be easily followed. A combination of the following is apparent: Effective transitions are used; a professional format is used. Mechanics and grammar o Inadequate (10 points): Sentences and paragraphs are difficult to read and understand due to poor grammar or mechanics o Needs improvement (15 points): The essay contains numerous grammatical and mechanical errors. o Adequate (20 points): The essay contains minimal grammatical or mechanical errors. o Professional quality (25 points): The essay is clear and concise and contains no grammatical or mechanical errors. Correctness of facts o Inadequate (10 points): Most facts are wrong. o Needs improvement (15 points): Some facts are wrong. o Adequate (20 points): Technical details are generally correct. o Professional quality (25 points): All facts are correct, and the technical explanation is both concise and complete. Completeness o Inadequate (10 points): Did not address some of the questions. o Needs improvement (15 points): Addressed the questions, but provided few details. o Adequate (20 points): Address the questions, but left out some details. o Professional quality (25 points): Addressed all questions completely.
Teacher Comments:
Focus
Content/ Support
GOOD -Strong topic -Adequate sentence to clearly topic sentence. introduce main -Adequate idea concluding - Adequate sentence. concluding sentence -All major points -All major have been points have covered. been covered.
SUPER!
-Most major points have been covered -Few details have been used to support points
-All points are supported with ample details (examples, facts, quotes, etc.)
-All points are supported with some details (examples, facts, quotes, etc.)
Organization
-The order of sentences within the paragraph is logical. -The order of the paragraphs is logical. -Good transitions are used to make the writing flow well. -Few to no errors in capitalization, punctuation, usage, spelling
-The order of sentences and paragraphs is somewhat logical. -Some transitions are used.
-Ideas within the paragraph may not be organized logically. -Transitions may be lacking.
Grammar/ Mechanics